The break thourgh (GI 15)

Esyla · Post by **Esyla** » Mon May 24, 2004 9:00 pm

Part 15

Darres sprang onto his left hand and flipped back to his feet. The shoots missed him as Angelo chased after him, thinking he had the advantage. Darres almost felt bad leading the guy on like this. You think a guy would learn after this trick had been played on him so many times. Darres recalled the hundreds of times he had faked Angelo out when he had been living with him as a brother. But those days were long gone, and they were different people.

“Stop wasting time.” Kaname screamed at him. “We don’t have forever to do this mission. Soon the government will notice and…”

“Look I will handle the fighting, you handle whatever you need to handle down there.” Darres screamed as he reeled around and fired a magazine at Angelo’s AS. One shot hit the arm he had already damaged. It didn’t slow him down much but Angelo did slow down.

“Hey don’t you yell at me like that…” Kaname started.

Sousoke broke in over the intercom. “Kaname this is not the time to be acting like this. We need you to find a weakness in the shield.”

“If I knew one I would have found it by now. This place has no weaknesses.” Kaname made a rather sour face.

“It has a weakness, you just haven’t been looking hard enough. Have you even tried your whispered state yet?” Darres jumped over a machine gun on the ground and sliced it in half from behind.

“Well no.”

“I think we have a winner. How about you try that and I will finally have enough brain power to attack rather than play cat and mouse.” With that Darres clicked off his communications so that he could concentrate and so that Kaname would leave him alone.

Darres took some deep breaths, pulled out his knife again and prepared to face Angelo. Angelo was now moving slowly enough that Darres had time to prepare.

“Stop playing these stupid games with me you arrogant brat.” Angelo screamed at him.

“You’re a little late for the I already have.” Darres said with the kind of cold voice that few had ever heard outside of Angelo.

“I really hate you.” Angelo screamed as he charged at Darres. The blades met letting of a screeching sound that would have burned the ears of anything near by.

“Not my problem.” Darres blocked the shot that Angelo fired. Darres needed him to use up his ammunition.

“I can make it.” Angelo was trying harder than normal to win because this time it was more. This time if he didn’t win he knew that he would not live to tell about it or hate more. And for that reason he hated Darres more. And that in it self was enough to cause his down fall. Angelo had become so wrapped up in his hatred for Darres that he was making silly little mistakes that were becoming fatal very slowly.

Suddenly he was trapped. Angelo was staring down the barrel of Darres’s gun. He hated Darres even more in that one second than he ever had. “ So this is how it ends. I end it here, by your hand, in a land I do not know.” But Darres did not hear these last words because Angelo had knocked his radio off by accident when he had found himself in his present situation.

“I have a life to go save.” Darres replied as he blew a shot that shredded half of the AS. Angelo might be fine, but from the look of the cockpit section he would not be moving well. Darres would have felt something if he had seen or heard Angelo only moments before. But to him it was just a machine and the enemy that had been destroyed, not his once adopted brother.

“Please Darres we must move fast. Or Natasha will be taken by the unstable one.” Kaname’s whispered voice rang in his cockpit.

“Where is my father moving her?” Darres asked taking a run at the shield. It still would not give.

“It does not matter where she is until we can enter through the field.” Kaname responded.

“So you are saying that you have nothing so far?” Darres questioned. If they didn’t get through the field it didn’t matter what they did, they wouldn’t win.

“No, but I think our luck may be changing.” Kaname sang, her smiling face in front of him. Darres just raised and eye brow very confused.

*

Loki sprinted down the hallway towards the generator as fast as he could, the giant man behind him closing in behind him. He knew he only had a little bit longer before the man would reach him. Loki summoned up all of his courage and strength for the final stretch.

Loki ran right in to the generator. With trembling hand he lifted the cover and below him laid a mass of wires and computer parts more complicated than the reaches of his mind could grasp. But without hesitation Loki pulled at any wires and chucked what machinery he could out of the generator. The effect was instant. The noise spread slowly through out the build of the shield weakening. Now they would attack right were he was standing. Loki needed to move again.

A hand griped his head. “What a naughty little thing to do.” The man said as he pulled Loki down the hallway. Loki figured that his fate was more than sealed now.

*
Out side the shield all the AS’s stopped in mid action. They all knew what had just happened. Sousoke just happened to be the closest and he sliced a hole in the shield right down to the rest of the generator. The explosion could be heard through out the whole complex seeing as all the fighting at stopped in shock.

*
Kali knew the sound better than any one. He froze in mid step and looked down at the girl he had by her hair. He just sneered at her as she scream in pain. He knew that it had hurt her. He was the one that had connected the generators to her life force.

“So my pretty, in their attempt to save you they will be hurting you more. How does that feel?” Kali sneered as he pulled her down the hall.

Natasha screamed as an AS passed though what was truly her aura. Kali hardly reacted to anything she did.

*

“See what did I tell you.” Kaname boasted.

“Yeah great. Now I can break through that stupid shield and get Natasha and Loki.” Darres was running at the shield. But he stopped right before he hit it, or rather the AS stopped right before it hit. “What in the world?” Darres screamed.

“I wouldn’t do that if I were you. That shield is in truth Natasha’s aura. Your father has some how combined the two. Any more damage to the shield will be felt physically by Natasha.” Kaname informed a very shocked Darres.

*
rest coming very soon
will be edited so check often

Belisarius · Post by **Belisarius** » Mon May 24, 2004 9:23 pm

I thought you were not going to post, edit , edit and edit like dd style.

Keep it going. I like.

one suggestion

More Fanservice

Esyla · Post by **Esyla** » Mon May 24, 2004 9:25 pm

and what kind of "fanservice" would you like?

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Tue May 25, 2004 3:04 am

Hmm... another (small) step forward, but you keep me in a state of
anticipation as to what happens next. Somewhere along the way you
said the skeletons in Natasha's closet gets aired out... And I'm trying
to remember if Sousuke made up to Kaname over that little spat they
had before the mission...

@Bel
It's a fanFIC... how the hell do you have fanservice in a fic?

Nevermind... I don't even want to know how your mind works...

Regards

Belisarius · Post by **Belisarius** » Tue May 25, 2004 10:42 am

@ Hellfire

If you don't like the way my mind works, then get out of the gutter. Because I have seen you ride the water way down here.

@ Esyla

What fanservice would I most like to see?

That's a loaded question.
After all, I don't want to start anything...................

Esyla · Post by **Esyla** » Tue May 25, 2004 7:57 pm

Bel@
well then why in the world did you ask for more??
i mean really
what is the point of asking for something
but not saying what it is
hissssssssssssssss *cat instinces kick in*

Hel@
yeah that will come after i finish up all of this current saga
sorry about you know
telling you things way ahead of when they happen
i plan out the story really far ahead and then just work in the details as i type.
so as soon as this is over i will be sure to get right on that.
*sorry about the cliff hangers, but they keep you reading, and that is a good thing*

Belisarius · Post by **Belisarius** » Tue May 25, 2004 8:46 pm

To get you riled up!

I love it when a cat hisses. It means that its no longer lazy.

I also a glutton for punsihment.

I like to cut cat whiskers off and see them walk.
Pull fly wings off.

I'm a cruel person.

I really think we need a Souske moment. His ability to ttotally misinturrept meaning is always a highlight.

Esyla · Post by **Esyla** » Tue May 25, 2004 9:28 pm

when i started this story i had intented on not even mentioning most of the characters

i say this becuase i feel i would be doing an injustice to the author and their original

please remeber
this story is about Natasha and Darres

Sousoke and Kaname are b class characters
and if you know anything about b class characters
i can kill them off any time i want
*evil meniching laugh*

i wonder how all of you would take that

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Wed May 26, 2004 8:36 am

@Bel
No seriously... in fact, draw me a schematic if you have to to show
HOW the heck you have fanservice in a fic

Somehow, I'd go for
the visual pantyshot than someone trying to describe it... well, depends
on how colorful they are with their word choice

Esyla wrote:i can kill them off any time i want
*evil meniching laugh*
i wonder how all of you would take that

You REALLY don't want to find out... do you?

Bit by bit Esyla... and given how *coughs*noone*coughs* writes anymore...

Regards