[POETRY] Ode To Romance

dd · Post by dd » Wed Nov 05, 2003 4:39 am

Softly, whirring wings of a dove
Trees bow once more, with grace; wind sighs, entranced
Dew glows bright in morn's embrace
What are those words of love?

SOUSUKE, YOU MORON !!!

Lovely, blossoms lead nature's dance
Kites float, on afternoon's sky; cranes watch, in awe
Rainbow arcs to blue on high
What says she heart in hands?

YOU MOODY MILITARY MANIAC !!!

Bravely, stars leave heaven's cloak
Cricket beckons dreams, alone; fog creeps, forlorn
Water strokes the sleeping stones
What honey has she spoke?

DAMN YOU SOUSUKE !!!

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Don't claim to be a poet. But, as a result of Sousuke's and Kaname's maddening plight, things went from bad to verse.

Who says inspiration is a good thing?

PookaKitten · Post by **PookaKitten** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 4:53 am

dd,

I like. Finally, I don't have a monopoly on FMP poetry.

Samantha

Tsushima Masaki · Post by **Tsushima Masaki** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 5:10 am

Humorous. I was chuckling while reading.

darkbane · Post by **darkbane** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:12 pm

not that i'm a big fan of poetry, but at least now we have more than one person writing it.

dd · Post by dd » Wed Nov 05, 2003 2:18 pm

@darkbane

As you can tell, it was more a stab at humor regarding K&S's situation than actual poetry.

I don't expect I will do any more, unless I see another opportunity to play with words.

darkbane · Post by **darkbane** » Wed Nov 05, 2003 9:47 pm

@dd

i can't see anything... anything that has the word poetry attached is automatically skipped by me, unless it also has a name attached that i recognize and respect (like pushkin, burns, frost, mayakovsky for instance)... hence, i didn't actually read any of the poetry here... gomen gomen ^_^;

dd · Post by dd » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:04 am

@darkbane:

Wise man....

darkbane · Post by **darkbane** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:20 pm

sorry, i couldn't pass up the opportunity :p

dd · Post by dd » Thu Nov 06, 2003 1:53 pm

heh heh heh

Whistles for @HELLFIRE, @grahf, and @Taurec...another @darkbane for the BBQ?

Post by **Taurec** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 5:09 pm

*makes darkbane scream like a little girly girl while pushing him down on the hot-plate*
and kicks dd into high orbit .... i kinda feel abused ...

dd · Post by dd » Thu Nov 06, 2003 5:42 pm

@Taurec

Hey, the view is kinda nice up here...

and NO grills in orbit.

Post by **Taurec** » Thu Nov 06, 2003 5:59 pm

But lot's of solar radiation .. and afaik a X50 is in progress .. <g> hope your sunscreen has an high enough factor ..

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:50 am

After reading ADV's Vol 1 of the FMP! manga, I know a few scenes
that just SCREAM to illustrate this poem

@Taurec
Does it matter? I think he's on a direct course for the core of the Sun.
And I don't think there's an SPF rating high enough for that

Regards

Avlor · Post by **Avlor** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 6:07 pm

@dd

You have an evil side, don't you? (I can't help cheesily grinning at your errr - uhmm - Love poem. Please don't ever write one of these things for me! (not like you would anyway!) (wink))

@ hellfire

well - after a few minutes up there you wouldn't even have to worry about anything at all. Just another floating thing in space to track.

Av bounces off flickering her red and white tail, happily humming out of tune.

terran empire · Post by **terran empire** » Thu Jun 03, 2004 9:20 pm

beutiful simply