OK. That's the rough job on CHP 13.
If anyone saw it late last night, some things have been deleted because not everything would fit.
Those things will show up in at the beginning of CHP 14, which will come out in rough form this evening.
That will lead to CHP 15 which marks the start of a new day in the story.
Meaning... if things go as planned... CHP 16 (a leap ahead in time by a number of months) may be the one that the 'lemon sharks' have all been waiting for.
(Hmmm... I like that term... 'lemon sharks'... hope it doesn't get me in trouble, though)
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I saw, I'd wondered when it seemed the story was disappearing! Kaname running down the steps again for Sousuke is the absolute cutest thing!dd wrote:If anyone saw it late last night, some things have been deleted because not everything would fit.
I LOVE IT!!! Lemon sharks!! It's great! I'll probably even ink us up a mascot, if people want to make it a club - here's the sketch:dd wrote:Meaning... if things go as planned... CHP 16 (a leap ahead in time by a number of months) may be the one that the 'lemon sharks' have all been waiting for.
(Hmmm... I like that term... 'lemon sharks'... hope it doesn't get me in trouble, though)
The idea came from a crossing of Tateo's picture of Kaname in an apron, and in your story where Kaname tells Sousuke "all other clothing is optional."
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here's the sketch:
Yikes!!!
Next time, post an earlier warning. A pic like that can give a guy a heart attack.
Great job.
I guess with all the bad things that happen to Sousuke in his life, he deserves something to make up for it.
Found that quote. Has me worried a bit. Then again, I also found this quote:The most dangerous species in order of documented attack records are: the great white shark, bull shark, tiger shark, grey nurse shark, lemon shark, blue shark, sand tiger, several species of hammerheads, and the mako.
Don't know why I added that, but somehow I feel better now...The brains of sharks.... are not bigger than walnuts, golf balls or similar, rather small objects.
(Hey, don't blame me... I'm just stating facts....)
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2 things. Warning Please (doesn't mind...but WHOAH!)
2nd. You think Sousuke would let THAT escape ? To be...more authentic, I have a suggestion. The spelling out of CENSORED or PROPERTY OF SERGEANT SAGARA, in bullet holes, or big yellow equipment box text. (me thinks Sousuke would do such things). (not critizicising idea by any means, just offering suggestions)
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2nd. You think Sousuke would let THAT escape ? To be...more authentic, I have a suggestion. The spelling out of CENSORED or PROPERTY OF SERGEANT SAGARA, in bullet holes, or big yellow equipment box text. (me thinks Sousuke would do such things). (not critizicising idea by any means, just offering suggestions)
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Thanks all, I'm glad you like the pic! If you'd like to see I actually redrew and inked it in, the picture and information about it are in the chapter illustrations thread here.
dd - I can't believe that there's actually such a thing as a lemon shark, what providence!! You could consider it a divine hint.......
@Kashim, TE - oh yeah, totally agree! just barely covered is a lot hotter than nude. And it's funny, I hadn't thought of it as fan service but you're right. They're fun drawings to do, and very easy (shamefully so in fact), so there might be more fan service in my future.
dd - I can't believe that there's actually such a thing as a lemon shark, what providence!! You could consider it a divine hint.......
@Kashim, TE - oh yeah, totally agree! just barely covered is a lot hotter than nude. And it's funny, I hadn't thought of it as fan service but you're right. They're fun drawings to do, and very easy (shamefully so in fact), so there might be more fan service in my future.
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