yesterday I died, today I live again, tomorrow I find love 2

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yesterday I died, today I live again, tomorrow I find love 2

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Disclaimer this fic is original and holds no intentional relation to full metal panic or any other anime all the characters are fictional however the back stories are a mix of real and imaginary it is intended to be part adventure part love comedy, part romance, and part science fiction all soldered together and displayed like modern art
Yesterday I died today I live again tomorrow I find love
Episode two: a requiem for me?


But in the mean time she had hit it off well with every one. All the school’s the various clicks either liked her or could care less about her. The lovely doveys liked her laugh, the pervs liked her sailor suit dress, and the jocks discovered that she could hold her own in arm wrestling and the angels were ready to sign her up as a full-fledged member. In other words the top of the school sovereigns loved her. But still I felt uneasy.
I guess it showed more than I thought because at lunch
“Well Tye she is an odd bird but she got potential”
The man who said that was one of my oldest friends. Jimmy we had known each other since grade school pulled the same stupid stunts and pranks he and I were pretty much brothers.
“She’s pretty to but not as pretty as me.”
That was Sonja she and I had been friends forever she is one of the Angel click a group of really hot really smart and athletic girls who acted as the schools queens. Back in Jr. high she had a crush on me and we did date for a little while but then my family fell apart and we separated. She fit in to the angels well a great body waist length red hair blue eyes and a cute voice.
“Well I have to say I have never seen a girl with full green hair before I mean streaked yes striped definitely but never total I wonder what her natural color is? And then that odd shyness of hers some one needs to break the ice. Good luck Tye.”
That was Meghan Wilson (we have twelve girls in our class named Meghan) who was just given the evil eye by Sonja. Meghan had been trying to set me up with girls for the past year I dated one or two but they never lasted very long.
“And why may I ask do I need good luck?”
“Well she got a great butt and nice tits that’s got to count for some thing!”
That was my friend Sean who just got hit over the head with his lunch by Meghan. He was one of the founding members of a group I call the pervs they basically are a group of guys mostly jocks who tell sex jokes 24/7 talk about there porno collections like the way one might talk about a gift from god and are your basic sleaz balls on the up side they were great athletes and quite fun to watch.
After school I like most students went to my part time job I worked at a small diner in town it was small work mostly just bringing burgers to truck drivers and construction workers. I did not like it but it paid the rent and insured I lived. By the timework was over the sun had set and the moon was out and full. I was on my way home when I spotted some thing out of the corner of my eye I pulled my motorcycles over to the corner and imagine my surprise when I saw Erica surrounded by a gang of men dressed in gray it looked like trouble to me.
Especially when they grabbed her and forced her up against a brick wall. So I stupidly turned knight in shining armor I was not an athlete or a true fighter but I was on the fencing team, and pretty good at kendo. I grabbed the closest thing I thought could be use full against the gang it turned out to be a lead pipe.
“HAY ASS HOLES LET THE GIRL GO NOW!!”
The gang turned around a few of them laughed.
“YAH RIGHT KID SO WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO HIT US WITH THAT STICK!!!”
“If I have to.”
“TYE GET OUT OF HERE NOW!!”
One of the gang jumped the bastard cleared a distance of ten meters in a single leap no exaggeration and slammed me in to a brick wall with the power of a freight train. I could feel bones shatter I forced all my strength together to try and fight back and I got one clean blow in but to my horror the lead pipe had no effect. It was like tissue paper trying to stop a sledgehammer as blow after powerful blow turned my once fit frame in to ruin, and soon I herd one final crack and I was down all the pain stopped I could fell nothing below my neck. My attacker smiled and with a smug attitude.
“Foolish human allow me to show you your proper place in the universe as an insect.”
He knocked me over and lifted his leg to crush my skull. My life began to flash before me as the jerk slowly brought his foot down. But before contact a foot slammed in to the jerks face. It was Erika and unlike my hit she did some damage her hit visibly destroyed that S.O.B.’s jaw. She then quite literally ripped the jerks head off.
“NO ONE HURTS MY TYE!!”
She proclaimed or at least I think she did I am not too sure as I was slipping in and out of consciousness
. I remember her placing her arms out to her sides and swinging one out at one of the attackers and he seem to fly a part like sliced cheese. The last two tried to run away but a pair of shadows formed out of nowhere and tackled them to the ground so hard the force shattered the pavement. Then every thing went black and I was viewing the world from out side my self I could see Erika standing over my life less shell crying

To be continued>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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hmm - okay - I will keep reading. I would like a description of the main character tho - what does he look like? I'm also curious to see what she sees in him (from her perspective).

oh - one word that distracted me from story: consensus should be consciousness
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