[FIC] Higher Education (pt 16)

[dd]

“Whole Fried Tilapia with Asian Herb Salad and Mamas Fresh Chili Sauce,” Sousuke asked, beginning to feel hungry. He usually wasn’t big on fine food, but the previous evening’s cooking demonstration and the subsequent meal had him somewhat sensitized.

“Hmmpppfff. No, Ichiban Shibori Beer Battered Cod with Mango Salsa.” Kaname turned up her nose and gave a little wave of her hand.

“Curried-Chicken Spring Rolls and Ginger Coconut Dipping Sauce,” Sousuke said, thinking that he found curried food to be to his liking.

“Wrong. Crispy Fried Calamari Tossed with Bali Hai Sambal.” Kaname took out her compact and lipstick and busied herself for a few moments, as Sousuke continued to scan the rather impressive take-out menu.

“This one would be good. Seared Duck with Soba and Kumquat Compote.” Sousuke sounded rather certain.

“That one would be better. Curry Marinated Chicken with Sweet Lemongrass and Pepper Sauce.” Kaname took out a small brush and began working on her hair.

“Thai-Mex Style Chicken and Tortilla Soup?” Sousuke sounded as if he knew that one was going to be rejected as well.

“You don’t sound very sure about that one. We should go with Hot and Sour Tomato and Mushroom Soup instead.” Kaname looked at her finger tips. “Sousuke, do you like the way my nails look?”

“Uh... they are very nice, Kaname. Do you like Wild Oriental Mushroom Salad with Mizuna and Crispy Noodles?” The young soldier began to wonder if Kaname was going to try and make all of his decisions for him. He had begun warming to the idea of having a girlfriend. But, he already had plenty of commanding officers.

“You should have asked me if I like Mamas Thai Style Caesar Salad with Crispy Calamari Croutons. The answer is yes. Take note of that for next time.” Kaname was smiling, but she would much rather be laughing.

Poor Sousuke.

She was putting him through basic training all over again.

“It might be nice to try a dessert. I have never made it a point to try them before. OK. Almond Cake with Raspberry Compote.” Sousuke wondered which other dessert would Kaname choose?

“Vietnamese Hot Coffee Chocolate Cake with Cream. That ought to do it.” Kaname smiled up at Sousuke, giving him a sweet large-eyed look.

Sousuke just stood there looking at her.

“”Something wrong?” Kaname asked, leaning up against Sousuke.

Sousuke ran one hand through his hair.

“Hmmmmm-m-m-m-m-m....” Kaname’s smile grew larger.

Sousuke turned to get a better look at his girlfriend’s face. He was trying to read what she was up to, but Kaname’s expression didn’t give anything away.

“Out with it, Mister!” Her voice snapped out like a command. But, her eyes were fill of delight.

“Are you going to make all of the decisions, Kaname?” Sosuske’s question was serious, not playful.

“Of course,” Kaname said, kissing him. She wasn’t going to prolong the game too long. She knew that Sousuke was probably wondering if she was going to try and change him and limit his freedom. “When we don’t decide together, or when you’re not the one best suited to make the choice.”

“Then....” Sousuke’s face loosened up. He looked relieved.

“I was playing with you. Get used to it. If you don’t, I may have to get my blouse wet again....” Kaname chosed that very moment to lean back and stretch slowly. Sousuke blushed, averting his gaze after getting an eye full for a few moments.

“Uh... that....” Sousuke stopped saying what he was about to let slip.

“Yes?” Kaname stepped up close to Sousuke. “You were saying....” Kaname was enjoying herself tremendously. There were things she could do with Sousuke that she had never done with anyone else. Lucky him.

“It is not a problem when your shirt gets wet.” Sousuke cursed his lack of control. The words had come out too fast. “So then... uh... should we order the foods that you selected?”

“Oh.” Kaname was rather pleased by Sousuke’s admission. Still, when he said it instead of her, it embarrassed her somewhat.

“Tonight’s my treat, Sousuke. Pick out whatever you like. If we get a little bit of all of them, though... we would have enough left over for tomorrow night.” She would give him some control, and hope that he would give her another night of eating dinner together.

She hoped that it would become a habit. There would be times when she might go out with her friends to eat, but she hoped that she didn’t want to eat alone any more than was necessary.

“I see. That is very clever tactical planning, Kaname. I would also surmise that you are working on strategic plans as well.” Sousuke had his suspicions. He was used to eating alone, and had grown to prefer it while on Da Danaan. But, his eyes had been opened to a lot of new things already. None had killed him. Nothing had reduced his abilities as a fighter. If anything, he was becoming more adept at reading social cues.

It was Kaname’s turn to stand and stare. Sousuke had seen through her scheming rather easily. As clueless as he still was in some ways, he was a formidable opponent.

She wouldn’t have it any other way.

“Is this going to be an otaku dinner tonight, Sousuke?” Kaname wrinkled her nose.

“Do you want it to be?” Sousuke had to keep from grinning. He really enjoyed teasing Kaname. He had never teased anyone before, and may never have an urge to tease anyone else. “I have a number of field kits in the apartment building. Bayonets could be used in place of those wooden skewers you have. Topographical maps might make an interesting table cover.”

“And should I dress up in camouflage, Sousuke?” Kaname couldn’t help but smile. She knew that Sousuke was playing. That alone filled her with wonder.

“Uh... I....” Some thought had suddenly struck Sousuke.

“Sousuke?” Kaname wondered what Sousuke was thinking. He had blushed ever so briefly.

“It is not important. We should place our order. It may take a while to prepare.” Sousuke was speaking quickly again.

“Sousuke!” Kaname wondered how long it would be before that kind of short exclamation would lose its effectiveness.

Better use it while she could.

“I only have camouflage pants, Kaname.” Sousuke straightened up. His expression looked somewhat guilty.

“So, why would……. oh……….I see.” Kaname blushed. Then she tossed her hair and grinned. “I can see where your mind is, soldier!”

“Kaname, I---“ Sousuke wondered if he had offended Kaname. She had been coming on strong, but he still did not know the limits of the playing field.

“Keep up the good work.” Kaname gave Sousuke a pat on the cheek. “Though I will say I’m disappointed in one thing.” Kaname began tapping her foot.

“Kaname?” Sousuke was finding it hard to keep up with her mental gymnastics.

“I should think that you could at least have ordered the food by now. Sheesh. Do I have to do everything?” Kaname laughed at the expression on Sousuke’s face. She gave him a quick hug, then let him go about ordering their dinner.

“Affirmative. I will choose some from the ones I mentioned and some from the one’s that you selected.” Sousuke signaled for the attention of the person at the take-out desk.

“Make certain they’re foods you can pick up with your finger, Sousuke. You did very well last night.” Kaname chuckled at Sousuke’s reaction. How could he perspire like that so quickly? “I’m only joking, Sousuke. We’ll eat whichever way you choose.”

“Uh… yes. Very good.” He turned to speak with the attendant who had come to take their order.

As the two of them sat in a small but beautifully decorated waiting area, Kaname pulled her mahogany and satin chair close to Sousuke’s. “You know, I’m very happy that we’re together, Sousuke.” That just about summed up the totality of all of her thoughts for the past few days. “More happy than I can remember being in a long time.” She closed her eyes and was content to lean against him.

“It is good to hear that.” Sousuke said, taking note of the way he was feeling. Kaname’s safety had always been very important to him. Now, her happiness just as important. But, that opened up a lot of uncertainty about his future, and about their future together. “I have never felt this way before.”

There would be very difficult decisions to make one day.

Very difficult indeed.


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Each carrying one of the two large bags, Kaname and Sousuke made their way along the sidewalk, chatting together as traffic passed by on the busy street.

Walking past the entry road that led to the Advanced Research Lab, Kaname asked Sousuke how the repair work was going.

"It will be a difficult process. Much of the heavy debris and severely damaged equipment has been removed. But, a number of power lines were severed... new components will take some time to be built, delivered, installed, and tested... and the final structural repair will be extensive." Sousuke stepped asied to let an old woman and her wheeled grocery carried move on past.

"But it could have been much worse, couldn’t it?" Kaname smiled, seeing Sousuke’s courtesy towards strangers.

"Affirmative. The secrets are safe. The major machinery is in tact. Few people were killed. And your injury was not very severe." The last statement was the most important to Sousuke. He wondered if that meant he was not taking his assignment seriously enough.

"Either was yours. Don’t forget to mention yourself, Sousuke." Kaname’s voice was a little harsh, as she wanted Sousuke to begin valuing himself more. "I feel kind of guilty, though."

"Kaname?" Sousuke stopped, wondering what Kaname meant.

"If I hadn’t been in that building, and did not end up saving you and injuring myself.... I don’t know if you would ever have given me the chance to...." She didn’t need to finish.

They both knew what she meant.

"Yes. I must admit I have felt the same way myself recently. That is a shameful admission from someone whose responsibility includes keeping that building and its inhabitants safe." The two of them began walking again.

"You’re only human, Sousuke. You have a right to your own feelings. What happened, happened. If we benefit from it, great! Our happiness didn’t cause the catastrophe, right? Spending time together won’t cause it to happen again." Kaname looped her free arm through Sousuke’s.

"But if I’m distracted from my work...." Sousuke had a number of concerns, one of which he voiced.

"No. You won’t be. This is not an ‘either or’ kind of thing. You can care about me AND do your job well. " Kaname pulled Sousuke to a halt, wanting to make an important point. "If you are not strong enough for that, I will be sorely disappointed in you. I’m willing to be strong enough to allow you whatever you need to do your job. I hope you can be strong enough to allow yourself whatever you need to be happy."

"I see." Sousuke looked at the fierce look on Kaname’s face, feeling grateful that she cared just as much about him as she did about herself. Especially given the things she had told him about her past. "I will do that for you Kaname. I will also try to learn how to do it for me as well."

"Hmmmpppfff! Not bad having someone who cares about you, is it?" Kaname bumped up against Sousuke.

"You may have some practical use after all," Sousuke said with a straight face. That earned him a kick in the shin followed by a kiss on the cheek. He smiled at that, but his face got rather serious. "I hope that the expected delays in the project lead to my staying here longer than originally planned. I pray that it does not lead to change in decisions concerning my greatest usefulness."

"Do you think they’d pull you away?" Kaname’s heart was in her throat. That was the last thing she wanted to hear at the moment.

"I cannot say. For the immediate future, however, I am very useful here. They ignored many of the security suggestions I had before. Now, they are planning on adding as many as they can while they rebuild the damaged areas." Sousuke sounded pleased about that. "Soon enough, I will be dedicating a fair amount of time to that."

Kaname had mixed feelings. She was glad that there was something that might bind Sousuke to Tokyo. She didn’t like the idea of his not having a lot of free time after class.

Taking the good with the bad.

It was something that she had been forced to do throughout her entire life.

She planned on making the most of any opportunity she was given.


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Kaname had worked up quite an appetite by the time Sousuke led her down a pleasnt stretch of sidewalk lined by young shapely trees.

Walking up to a narrow four story building, he waved his arm. “This is what I call home.”

Kaname looked at the tidy and compact building, taking note of the clean marble steps and the carved stone bordering the beautiful bottom floor windows with their spiral-shaped bars and the flanking ornately carved wooden shutters. The front was deep red-orange brick. A large fluted arch covered a small recessed entryway. The intricate metal railing leading to the front door seemed recently painted.

“It’s a very nice building, Sousuke. Can we see your room from here?” Kaname wondered what floor Sousuke lived on. Knowing that he was a fitness freak, she guessed the fourth floor.

“Yes, Kaname. They are all my rooms.”

“What?” The answer didn’t quite register with Kaname at first. “How can they all be your rooms, Sousuke?”

“It is my building, Kaname. I am the only one who lives here.” Sousuke took out his key and opened the front door. Holding it open, he ushered a slack-jawed Kaname into his home.

“B-But.... did Mithril buy the whole building for security purposes? Or will this one day serve as a larger safe house or base for operations?” Kaname began looking around the small lobby they headed into. It looked very nicely kept, probably with the original furniture, paintings, wall coverings, and lamps.

“Negative. I bought the building, Kaname.” Sousuke walked into the area that was once a concierge’s station. A number of monitors were set-up, as well as various types of recording equipment. Punching numbers into a keyboard, he ran a series of tapes at fast forward, reviewing logs of the external camera systems.

“The whole building? But, it must have been very expensive, Sousuke!” Kaname couldn’t believe what she had heard.

“Correct. But, Mithril pays very well. My means were always very meager, and I have been in service for a long time now. Members of the Finance Department helped me make a number of wise investments. This building itself shall serve as an investment of sorts.” Finished with his perusal, Sousuke took the second bag from Kaname and led her down an exquisitely paneled hallway lined by old-fashioned lamps, mirrors, and murals.

“You never cease to amaze me, Sousuke.” Kaname was taken aback. A number of ideas began running through her head, but she realized that she was rushing things.

“We can eat in this room, Kaname. It must have been a meeting room of sorts. I make use the table table in here, for days when I have sit-down meals.”

The room had a high sculpted ceiling, plus a wall full of fancy windows, each heavily barred and exhibiting wires from some kind of sensors.

“I will get us some plates and glasses. The kitchen facilities are through this door.” Sousuke left and returned with a small serving cart full of bowls, plates, glasses, and utensils.

Kaname looked around the room breathlessly, as she helped Sousuke arrange the meal. “This is all very beautiful, Sousuke.”

“Affirmative. I was very fortunate. The owner was willing to sell me the facilities intact, with all of the current contents. I would not have been good at arranging things myself. I will give you a tour after we eat.” Sousuke’s look rested on Kaname’s face. It was rather intense.

“Sousuke?” Kaname wondered what he was thinking.

“It is....” Sousuke was looking for the right way to bring up a certain subject.

Kaname looked on, more curious than before. What was he going to ask?

Could he mean to....

“This building... it is larger than one person needs... I was wondering....” Sousuke’s face looked nervous. His eyes darted to Kaname, then away, then back again.

Kaname felt her heart begin racing. Her breathing sped up. Could Sousuke be asking her to live with him? That would be so bold for anyone, especially him.

Their relationship had not proceeded that far yet.

What should she do if he was? It was something she had briefly thought about when she heard that the building was Sousuke’s, but she didn’t know if she was ready for that kind of step.

“Are you asking me if I want to live with you, Sousuke?” She swallowed hard, but managed to meet his uneasy gaze.

“Yes.” That word had Kaname feeling weak in the knees. “But it... you would not... the arrangement would be one of convenience and frugality. Uh... I am not trying....” Sousuke ran down. He was clearly embarrassed. “There are many open rooms. Even open floors. You could select as many as you wish, wherever you like. You would be near me that way. I could always be certain that you are safe. But... I would not wish to... keep track of your actions...."”

Kaname tried to settle herself down. She realized what Sousuke was proposing. No, she did not want to use that word. It made her blush.

It was a very nice arrangement, if she wanted to go through with it.

She would be closer to school. Sousuke was unlikely to ask for any rent money. It was a gorgeous building. She could put her rooms as close to Sousuke as she thought was proper, and as near as he would allow.

And if their relationship progressed where she hoped it would....

“If I were to be called away for a while, the building’s security systems would still function adequately. And, if I was called away for....” Sousuke stopped momentarily, not wanting to consider certain possibilities at that time.

“I could still live here, and also help take care of the building for you?” Kaname was impressed by Sousuke’s line of reasoning. She wondered if he had thought about this before, or whether he had the same ideas she did when they walked in together.

“Yes.” Sousuke’s posture and look suggested that he was somewhat anxious.

“That’s a very nice offer, Sousuke. Could I have some time to think things over?” Kaname didn’t want to rush in to things and get Sousuke’s hopes up, then think of some reason why she shouldn’t have made her decision.

“Certainly, Kaname. I should go get some ice. Napkins would also be advisable.” Sousuke left to gather up the items he had mentioned.

Kaname smiled. It certainly looked like Fate was offering her wonderful choices. Things were going more splendidly than she could ever have imagined.

Did that mean she should start to worry? Was Destiny setting her up for some great fall?

In any case, she would not worry about that tonight.


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After a leisurely and pleasant dinner, Sousuke cleared off the table and graciously allowed Kaname to help him.

“When I made you dinner, you didn’t have to clean up.” Kaname put on a false pout.

“You told me I couldn’t. At one time you threatened me with bodily harm.” Sousuke placed plates and dished into huge stainless steel sink basis and started the water.

“You’re a soldier. Somebody, on your side or the other, is ALWAYS offering you bodily harm. That doesn’t stop you then does it?” Kaname poured some liquid soap in. When there were enough bubbles, she scooped some out and threw them on Sousuke.

“I see what your idea of helping is, Kaname.” Sousuke handed Kaname a large sprayer. “Why don’t you just get... it... over... with?” Sousuke gave Kaname a somewhat peeved look. “We were discussing help. If you remember correcty, I informed you that you did not need to do so.”

“I know, Sousuke. I’m just better than you, that’s all. Nicer. Smarter. Better looking.” Kaname smiled. “Besides, I’ve matured more than you have. I have no desire to squirt you with this hose. That would be childish.”

“Fine. We are almost done here. I will give you a----” Sousuke shook his head when a stream of water ran down from his hair and onto his chin. He was not in the mood for horseplay of that type. Looking at Kaname’s grin, he thought of just the response. “If you are intent on getting me all wet...... you might as well come into the shower with me.”

Kaname twitched.

She squeezed the handle on the sprayer inadvertently, leaving a large wet spot on her skirt. That wasn’t supposed to happen. She considered squirting Sousuke, but he didn’t seem to be in the mood for that.

Well then, she would follow his lead.

“OK. Let’s go.” Kaname put the hose away. She wanted to see what Sousuke would do next. “I hope it’s one with a big glass enclosure. There will have to be room for both of us. Otherwise, things will get a bit tight.”

Sousuke stood silently for a moment. Kaname was a crafty opponent. She had been studying his ways, just as he had been taking note of hers. He swallowed hard. What if Kaname had something risqué in mind? Should he follow through with it?

He couldn’t back down now.

“The top apartment has just such a shower. I will give you a tour on the way up.” Sousuke left things to soak. He would get to them later. Tonight. Tomorrow. Next week. Whenever.

“Great!” Kaname followed after Sousuke. She was certain he was just playing a game of brinksmanship, but couldn’t be entirely certain. He had shown more and more affection, and had been willing to accept more and more affection from her. His education was proceeding nicely.

No. She couldn’t back down now.

Most of the rooms in the apartment building remained furnished, with beds, dressers, and small table and chair sets. All had full baths, and a majority had kitchenettes. A fair number of rooms had been redone, however, depending on Sousuke’s needs.

Kaname was shocked to hear that Sousuke made use of all of the bedrooms. He never slept in the same room two nights in a row.

At least he had learned to sleep on top of beds, she was amused to learn.

He showed her a library… a small gymnasium… an armory… an office… and TV room. A large laundry facility was present in the basement, as were sizeable areas of storage. The top floor had the largest bedroom suites… a small separate kitchen… a decadently large sitting area… and a enormous bathroom.

“Will this suffice, Kaname?” Sousuke showed Kaname a large shower area, complete with a small sitting area inside the shower. The glass was brass edged and etched with heraldic scenes.

Kaname looked at the shower with a mixture of avarice and trepidation. It was wondrous.

What she wouldn’t give to be able to take a shower in that every morning!

The large soaking tub elsewhere in the room was also elegant beyond belief, lined with polished stone. The sinks and mirrors were equally as elegant.

Now, how should she play this out.

Oh.

That might be fun. But, it would be risky, and could leave her in a rather embarrassing situation.

But, for some reason, she decided to go for it. It was almost as if she had been good and proper for years on end, and needed a chance to let things hang out a little, so to speak. And, she had been so solemn and so restrained for much of the past three years. She needed to get things out of her system.

Besides, she thought she knew Sousuke.

What was the chance that he would take things very far, or let her do the same?

“This room is amazing, Sousuke. It will do just fine. Why don’t you get the water running?” Kaname held back a grin, watching the play of emotions across Sousuke’s face. For a moment her imagination wandered, and it was her turn to blush when Sousuke looked over at her.

The water got hot very fast, and soon a great foggy cloud of steam filled the shower. Sousuke went through the motions of correcting the water temperature. A number of images ran through his mind, with his imagination filling in the enticing details.

“Uh… it appears that the shower is ready, Kaname. You may go in first, if you like. I will use it after you are finished. I should get us some towels.” Sousuke swallowed hard again and turned to leave.

“The towels over there will do just fine, Sousuke.” Kaname nodded towards a number of neatly folded towels on a fancy dresser. “And you asked me to get in the shower with you, right?” That ought to get an ‘uh’ or two.

“Uh… if that’s what you want… um…. you may undress in here while I disrobe in the other room.” Sousuke tried to keep his voice even. A small part of him was overly eager, but for the most part he simply felt nervous.

Kaname was playing, wasn’t she?

“Now, what would be the fun in that?” Kaname licked her lips, figuring that would send Sousuke’s pulse rate skyrocketing. “Why don’t we get started….” She slowly unbuttoned her blouse, realizing that she actually wanted to have Sousuke look at her. “Come on, Sousuke. You too. This is not a bawdy house, you know.”

“You… yes… I…. Affirmative.” Sousuke fumbled with the buttons on his shirt momentarily, until he took a deep breath, set his jaw, and started over in a more controlled fashion. He could do this. There had been any number of times where he had seen naked women. Rescued prisoners. Victims in need of medical aid. Any number of different situations.

But, none of them had been Kaname.

Kaname marveled at the change in Sousuke’s physique. She pulled so hard on one button, that it popped off, leaving her holding a short pair of strings. He must work out a lot. But, it wasn’t all blushes and giggles. She bit her lip. There were a number of rather nasty looking scars there.

She dropped her blouse on the floor, feeling a good bit self-conscious. Sousuke followed suit.

They both stood there watching each other silently, until Kaname decided to make the next move. She unbuttoned her skirt and let in slide to the floor. She fought the urge to put her hands in front of her. Part of her was gratified, seeing the look in Sousuke’s eyes when he looked at her legs.

Sousuke quickly averted his gaze. How far was this going to go?

If Kaname took anything else off….

“Sousuke? What are you waiting for?” Kaname swallowed hard herself. She was beginning to feel excited. That was not in the plan. She needed to stay focused. It was almost time for her move.

“Um… yes. I will continue. My apologies.” Sousuke turned slightly and took a glance at a large mirror. It showed a nice view of Kaname from behind. He blinked repeatedly. She looked just as nice from that angle.

“I’m sure it’s a very nice mirror, Sousuke.” Kaname blushed when she said that. She couldn’t help herself.

Sousuke mumbled an apology and unbuckled his belt... unbuttoned his button... undid the zipper... nd let his pants slide down. He stepped out of them as resolutely as he could, feeling the cold air raising some goose bumps.

Kaname looked at Sousuke’s legs, noting more scars there. No doubt, each scar had a tale to tell. Some day, if they grew close enough, she would want to hear each and every story. At the moment though, she had a task to accomplish. Looking down at both their feet, she saw that everything was in place.

“Try not to drool, Sousuke. It’s very unbecoming.” She reached around behind her, as if she were going to unfasten her bra.

Sousuke should be closing his eyes any moment now.

Bingo!

Moving quickly, Kaname kicked her skirt and blouse out of Sousuke’s reach… picked up Sousuke’s clothing… then threw his pants and shirt into the shower. Grabbing her own clothes she ran off laughing, looking for some place to get dressed again.

That all served a number of purposes, she told herself. It would make Sousuke less hesitant whenever she DID want him to take his clothing off. And, she won.

Big time!

When she was finished getting dressed, she expected to find Sousuke wrapped in a number of towels like a mummy, holding his sopping we pants and shirt.

But, he was nowhere to be seen.

“Sousuke?” She called out, looking around the large suite of rooms. There was still no sign of him. A trail of water led out into the hallway.

Trying to follow the trail, Kaname cursed. Even in this playful situation, Sousuke was a soldier. He had obviously walked in various directions, leaving a number of false trails.

“Sousuke, it was only a joke. Please don’t be mad.” Kaname checked in a number of rooms, without success. With every door she opened, she held her breath, her heart beating rapidly.

Was he in there?

Would he have some answering trick waiting for me?

Room by room, Sousuke covertly followed Kaname. It was good practice for him, and it allowed him to assess her proficiency in search type operations and in detecting possible assailants.

He would allow this to go on for quite a while. There was little doubt in his mind that Kaname would grow more and more worried with each passing moment. That would teach him something as well.

How long would it take her to go from worried to annoyed. Then, how long would it take to go from annoyed to angry.

“Please, Sousuke. I’m sorry. I was just having fun with you. There’s no reason to be embarrassed or upset.”

Sousuke smiled. That next room might get a response out of Kaname, especially if she didn’t turn the light on first.

“Ahhhh!” There was the sound of things falling off a shelf. The light went on. “Damn you, Sousuke!” Kaname had stumbled across a number of manikins he used to hold various uniforms and body armor. “You BETTER hide, Mister!”

Sousuke had seen enough. It was time for him to head off to his walk-in closet and put some new clothes on. After that, he would sneak past Kaname and go back down to work in the kitchen. If she was clever, she would look there soon enough.

It was a practical place for him to be.

If she wanted to check the place out floor by floor and door by door, he would let her. This all served a number of purposes.

She should have known better than to toy with a Specialist.

Especially the Specialist who owned the building.

[terran empire]

great job i love it
Finger foods right on top of my things to order for a hot date list

[Andrei Burnside]

Nice chapter. I liked it. It's good kaname is showing more consideration for sousuke, and that he can take the offensive once and awhile. I liked his method of presenting the offer, and I liked Kaname's reaction to it. Showed some serious maturity and delayed reader gratification. But seriously. Hold off on the mush. Those sharks are...circling...and it's making me annoyed. /holds up harpoon gun.

[dd]

But seriously. Hold off on the mush

This is in essence a mush story. It's primarily about Kaname's feelings, but also about the things that change in Sousuke.

But, there will be some more difficult stuff for them both soon.

[terran empire]

who said to hold off on the mush i'll fredie krouger them
mush must have mush

[Andrei Burnside]

I don't have any problem with mush...I enjoy it. Too much is a problem, and action will help. Greatful for plot details. I liked the story for reasons I've stated...but people aren't paying any attention to mine...possibly because of it. /me sighs. It's what I get for picking a minority couple. This is a tough crowd. /Sigh.

[dd]

but people aren't paying any attention to mine...possibly because of it. /me sighs. It's what I get for picking a minority couple. This is a tough crowd. /Sigh

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Well, when I'm done writing, I'll give it all a read from the start. I don't want to read any other stuff until then, so it doesn't influence me.

Actually, except for the banter, there has not been a lot written about the story I'm doing either.

On other sites, people are begging for K&M stuff. I can't remember... did you post it on Blissful Ignorance?

[dd]

Well, that's the rough-in for Chp. 16. When I look at it later, I may polish it a tad.

Sorry, sharks....

Looks like the lemon (...if there is going to be any lemon....) has been pushed back again.

***Checks to make certain he is close to shore***

Hope you didn't mind that the Chp. could be viewed as a tease for anyone who is a lemon hound.

Sharks don't hold grudges, right?

Right?

[woman22980]

She reached up behind her head, as if she were going to unfasten her bra.

This must be a guy/girl thing, but a girl wouldn't be reaching over her head to unfasten a bra, you reach your arm under. A bra clasp is usually situated right below your shoulderblades. I know Sousuke wouldn't know the difference, but I also don't believe Kaname would think to try and simulate taking her bra off by reaching over. Anyway, that's this girl's observation

Sousuke cleaned the table while and allowed Kaname to help him.

Looks like the "while" shouldn't be there, right?

He, not in the mood for horseplay of that type. Looking at Kaname’s grin, he thought of just the response.

Something about the grammar in these sentences seems wrong, should it be "He was not in the mood..."?

“If you are intent on getting me all wet. You might as well come into the shower with me.”

Comma/period switch?

On the chapter itself - Awww!!!!!!! Words can't express how much I love what happens in this chapter, it's so cool, and mushy, and funny! It was also a bit of a tease, but I like it nonetheless. Boy though, if Sousuke was ever going to get a halisen slapping in this story it'd be after letting her run all around the building looking for him.

So, no grudges!

[dd]

Anyway, that's this girl's observation

Correctimundo.

Whomever is doing so. Sometimes you just have to stop and picture things. Or, have a helpful shark ready to bite if you don't...

Cleaned up the first round of quick-typing errors.

So, no grudges!

Whew....

[terran empire]

i am not sure who deserved what but it was fun

[Avlor]

but but that was sooo...!!!




Wo0 is right about the bra thing. Now a halter top will tie at the neck... (see pic)

new "wish list" item - accidentally running into each other at "inopportune" times.

(The kitsune side of me cannot resist the grudge...)
as far as grudges go - well sharks may not have good memories. (lasts up to end of frenzy) But until then when there is a grudge to be had you'd better watch out...you had promised a lemon (not that I need a REAL LEMON it but that's not the point...)

/Av's fin sticks out of the water
/Jaws music plays
/Av chases Dd-sama up onto shore - teeth gnashing all the way to shore...
/Av not see shore (concentrating on grudge - sharks have 1 small CPU - only manage 1 task at time...)
/Av gets beached...
grumble grumble
/flop flop flop
/Teeth marks in sand ans haul self back to water
P-Tweeewy!
/Spit sand out...
/Sigh
/back to swiming (and packing...)

[dd]

but but that was sooo ...!!!

Hmmm.

3 lemon sharks.

Is there a rating system?

And do I want to know it.

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Side note: All bras should unsnap at the front. If not, all clothing should be velcro'd together. As it is, there is no doubt that clothing is designed by women.

At least they were kind enough to put zippers in a man's pants. Then again, that could be a cruel plot (wont' say why... ouch...)

[terran empire]

personaly as a wacko male i feel womens cloathing should be taped on
*pulls out roll of duct tape*
ok ladys who's up for a fashion make over

[woman22980]

3 lemon sharks.

Is there a rating system?

And do I want to know it.

A rating system for the sharks, or a rating system for the lemon? I suppose we could have something like this -

Shark-Won't-Bite Level 2 - best protection - when the author includes EVERY gory detail of the sexual encounter, after all, giving them their pounds of flesh is always very wise...
Shark-Won't-Bite Level 1 - ok protection - when the author decides to include a sexual scene but makes it rather more tasteful than a porno flick.... this one is also very good...
Shark-Won't-Bite Level 0 - NO protection - the nefarious "fade to black" trick. Sharks are not confused by this trick, no matter how active their imaginations may be at filling in the details.
Shark-Won't-Bite Level -1 - tempting fate - teasing the sharks with scenes that are almost lemon, but end up being something else (for an example, see CHAPTER 16!)
Shark-Won't-Bite Level -2 - asking for DEATH - promising lemon and not delivering!!

How's that work?

Side note: All bras should unsnap at the front. If not, all clothing should be velcro'd together. As it is, there is no doubt that clothing is designed by women.

oooh.... like Av said, another wish list item - Sousuke fumbling around Kaname's back trying to undo her bra. No matter HOW much of a specialist he is, he's definitely inexperienced with that. Girls get good at only as a matter of necessity and long years of practice. How much more convient for him if it did unfasten in the front ne? But you already have the clasp in the back! oh yeah... can't wait.... *rubs hands together excitedly*

/EDIT - oh yeah, and velcro??? That's so romantic, the atmosphere it would create.... Kaname slowly unfastened her blouse... *Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........iiiiii....ppppppppp*