For Readers Confuse of Ryo's Story (For Volume 4)
Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:27 pm
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Hello Readers of Ryo's Story,
I have never expected lots of people to be reading Volume 4, Polaris. It surprises me and I wonder how my writing can be so top knotch (but truthfully, I think my writing still needs some polishing) I am here to explain any confusion if you are reading Ryo's Story Volume 4 and wonder what's up with the timeline.
Ryo Iwamura has to go back sometime to explain how he came to be so Volume 4 was the perfect chance to talk about it, since Volume 3 had Ryo looking at that picture who is Haleigh Toyotomi and some odd character at the end of AAR chapter 5 of Volume 3.
Two years before anything that happened, CIA is really like a military structure and I apologize because I did not intend the CIA we all know to be like that. However, in the FMP world, I thought about how is the United States Government would be like if the Berlin Wall did not crash and how the Cold War did not end. So, I concluded back then that maybe the United States had to combine the Defense Intelligence Agency, the military intel, together with CIA, a civilian intelligence agency. This will make things better, if not, more secure and accurate for getting information.
The school that Ryo is staying currently in vol. 4 is and I expect readers may have infered that the school IS JINDAI HIGH SCHOOL and of course, I had to do it because if I put a different school, readers would lose interest. But my other reason for this is that I want to broaden the purpose how Sagara will be in that school next two years later. The headmaster will be discuss later in future volumes.
Next, we have Ryo's unknown age. Just how old is he? Hell I'm not even sure if we should even be worrying about his age, but rather it is up to the reader to decide how old is he by his traits and body language. This should give the readers enough evidence but if it does not, I'll tell you someday, sometime. Haleigh Toyotomi's age is also mysterious but I can say they are almost the same age.
Back to the timeline, there may be some character's you have come across from volume 3, during Operation L.A. Rush. Monet and Zuproc (read that name the other way- its written to protect that name) are essential to Iwamura during volume 4 because of their quick understanding of their beloved history differences.
The same route to go home is also used by Ryo and Haleigh, the same way that Souske and Kaname goes home. For readers, it is odd that Ryo and Haleigh would live around Kaname's area.
Haleigh Toyotomi seems to have a past that she does not talk with to other peers and Ryo senses that so he wants her to talk about it, to let everything go instead of holding it in her. His mission is to protect her nothing else but He is not like Souske Sagara, a weapons freak. Ryo is human too and knows from his heart that Haleigh will tell him but not now because of the time.
Haleigh's organization is questionnable here also. I also had debated heatedly over who should she work for and finally, I set off to think of how her group is structured. Sorry, spoilers end here.
Jindai high is still the same and no damage will happen there. I think that is all for now. If you have questions, just post below this topic and I'll answer back. The next chapter after Polaris is called Cassiopeia but it's under rewriting process so bare with me please. Here's a preview of Cassiopeia.
From Ryo's Story Cassiopeia 4B I:
“Captain Iwamura, the person you are looking at has a high probability of being a spy for an unknown organization. We do not know if she knows your job but if she does, it is most likely she will receive orders to kill you. I understand you already know this person very well and all seven of us agree that you are to keep that person under your watch at all times”
The chief stops for a second and spoke again.
“However, she cannot know you are guarding her. You are only to protect her when needed so use clear judgment Captain. You cannot tell her who you work for, why do you guard her, or tell her your true position. There maybe times when you have to let go of something you hold precious most Captain… remember that.”
“A penetration agent from Recon & Intel Gathering Division was able to give us his last report before he died last week from the person’s organization. His report stated that there is mass production of unknown Arm Slaves currently in Europe. It’s not a M6, so there’s been talk that it is a new AS which we are still trying to research about. We do know it is not the M9 because this AS has more technology being developed before it. The agent wrote there is a suspicious connection with that person you know, that AS, and the organization. From that report, I think this organization is huge but not huge enough that a lot of people would know about” he said quietly.
Haleigh…
Why her? Why does it have to be her of all girls in the world? Why does it have to be the girl I’ve come to trust?
Thoughts about her are flooding into my mind. I cannot stop them from coming into me. Her soft voice echoes in my ears, displacing the Commander’s commands.
“…I would like to be your Polaris, so you can always tell me how you feel. You don’t have to hide your sad thoughts away from me Ryo… It doesn’t matter what happens to me, as long as you are happy, I will be happy. With you, I can do anything.”
I am lost to what I must do. There has never been a moment that I have been in this situation in my life or my occupation. What am I to do? This is wrong, why was I even chosen for this mission? Was it a set up? And who is... what is this organization?
END OF PREVIEW!
Thanks readers!
marauder_09
Hello Readers of Ryo's Story,
I have never expected lots of people to be reading Volume 4, Polaris. It surprises me and I wonder how my writing can be so top knotch (but truthfully, I think my writing still needs some polishing) I am here to explain any confusion if you are reading Ryo's Story Volume 4 and wonder what's up with the timeline.
Ryo Iwamura has to go back sometime to explain how he came to be so Volume 4 was the perfect chance to talk about it, since Volume 3 had Ryo looking at that picture who is Haleigh Toyotomi and some odd character at the end of AAR chapter 5 of Volume 3.
Two years before anything that happened, CIA is really like a military structure and I apologize because I did not intend the CIA we all know to be like that. However, in the FMP world, I thought about how is the United States Government would be like if the Berlin Wall did not crash and how the Cold War did not end. So, I concluded back then that maybe the United States had to combine the Defense Intelligence Agency, the military intel, together with CIA, a civilian intelligence agency. This will make things better, if not, more secure and accurate for getting information.
The school that Ryo is staying currently in vol. 4 is and I expect readers may have infered that the school IS JINDAI HIGH SCHOOL and of course, I had to do it because if I put a different school, readers would lose interest. But my other reason for this is that I want to broaden the purpose how Sagara will be in that school next two years later. The headmaster will be discuss later in future volumes.
Next, we have Ryo's unknown age. Just how old is he? Hell I'm not even sure if we should even be worrying about his age, but rather it is up to the reader to decide how old is he by his traits and body language. This should give the readers enough evidence but if it does not, I'll tell you someday, sometime. Haleigh Toyotomi's age is also mysterious but I can say they are almost the same age.
Back to the timeline, there may be some character's you have come across from volume 3, during Operation L.A. Rush. Monet and Zuproc (read that name the other way- its written to protect that name) are essential to Iwamura during volume 4 because of their quick understanding of their beloved history differences.
The same route to go home is also used by Ryo and Haleigh, the same way that Souske and Kaname goes home. For readers, it is odd that Ryo and Haleigh would live around Kaname's area.
Haleigh Toyotomi seems to have a past that she does not talk with to other peers and Ryo senses that so he wants her to talk about it, to let everything go instead of holding it in her. His mission is to protect her nothing else but He is not like Souske Sagara, a weapons freak. Ryo is human too and knows from his heart that Haleigh will tell him but not now because of the time.
Haleigh's organization is questionnable here also. I also had debated heatedly over who should she work for and finally, I set off to think of how her group is structured. Sorry, spoilers end here.
Jindai high is still the same and no damage will happen there. I think that is all for now. If you have questions, just post below this topic and I'll answer back. The next chapter after Polaris is called Cassiopeia but it's under rewriting process so bare with me please. Here's a preview of Cassiopeia.
From Ryo's Story Cassiopeia 4B I:
“Captain Iwamura, the person you are looking at has a high probability of being a spy for an unknown organization. We do not know if she knows your job but if she does, it is most likely she will receive orders to kill you. I understand you already know this person very well and all seven of us agree that you are to keep that person under your watch at all times”
The chief stops for a second and spoke again.
“However, she cannot know you are guarding her. You are only to protect her when needed so use clear judgment Captain. You cannot tell her who you work for, why do you guard her, or tell her your true position. There maybe times when you have to let go of something you hold precious most Captain… remember that.”
“A penetration agent from Recon & Intel Gathering Division was able to give us his last report before he died last week from the person’s organization. His report stated that there is mass production of unknown Arm Slaves currently in Europe. It’s not a M6, so there’s been talk that it is a new AS which we are still trying to research about. We do know it is not the M9 because this AS has more technology being developed before it. The agent wrote there is a suspicious connection with that person you know, that AS, and the organization. From that report, I think this organization is huge but not huge enough that a lot of people would know about” he said quietly.
Haleigh…
Why her? Why does it have to be her of all girls in the world? Why does it have to be the girl I’ve come to trust?
Thoughts about her are flooding into my mind. I cannot stop them from coming into me. Her soft voice echoes in my ears, displacing the Commander’s commands.
“…I would like to be your Polaris, so you can always tell me how you feel. You don’t have to hide your sad thoughts away from me Ryo… It doesn’t matter what happens to me, as long as you are happy, I will be happy. With you, I can do anything.”
I am lost to what I must do. There has never been a moment that I have been in this situation in my life or my occupation. What am I to do? This is wrong, why was I even chosen for this mission? Was it a set up? And who is... what is this organization?
END OF PREVIEW!
Thanks readers!
marauder_09