Fanart 2

Kelek · Post by **Kelek** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:06 am

This thread can be deleted. Thanks.

Eidolon · Post by **Eidolon** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:19 am

Draw the lineart darker, and that would actually be a really, really nice pic. The soft colours work really well with Ren, imho.

Awesome work!

Andrei Burnside · Post by **Andrei Burnside** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:22 am

Lines are as clean as pisscutter (good thing). The figure seems to be well done. Hair is messed up (slightly)...hmm...It's all watercolory. As eidolon said...darker lineart...although with the graphic pen and tablet...I'd say pretty good (given it's problems). Lines are clean, and so is the figure. Nice appendage work.

Kelek · Post by **Kelek** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:41 am

As said before...my scanner almost can't distinguish anything on the paper that's lighter than pen; that explains the light lines.

"
Ward Blacklocke: And you forgot her breasts...sorta...*looks stupid*
Kelek: There are blue lines on her pleated skirt.
Ward Blacklocke: Darker. They need to be darker...
Kelek: I know. Her arms are over her breasts...she's always posed like that.
"

Her hair and face are off too. Mostly her hair.

[Kelek bangs head against wall.] So just why did I put this up?

Eidolon · Post by **Eidolon** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:52 am

Awesome work!

I'd say pretty good

mmmmkay?

Stop being a mopey artist.

I'll take pic (no scanner) of a few of my sketches tomorrow to make you feel better.

Kelek · Post by **Kelek** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 3:56 am

Not mopey, just realistic. I'll stop criticizing my own stuff in public, then.

Eidolon · Post by **Eidolon** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 4:02 am

Oh I know. It's really just a typical case of "your toughest critic is yourself", but it's fun to make fun of artists.

But like I said, if I took a week off and just drew, I still couldnt do that probably.

*makes note to find sketch of Frey specifically*

Altho actually that sketch turned out pretty well (except for the head, as you will see)

Kelek · Post by **Kelek** » Sat Jul 17, 2004 4:10 am

I forgot how long it took to draw this (the pencil on paper part). Probably in 30 minutes. Usually I leave it alone for a while, then edit so I can see it in a new light (but am usually too impatient for that).

Somehow my really quick scribbles or doodles turn out better.

(This isn't one of them and neither was that Mao fanart.)

FullMetal*Panic!

Fanart 2

Fanart 2

Watercolory!