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<FIC> Fox Hunt Chpt 5

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Full Metal Panic: Fox Hunt
By: Azurathe

Disclaimer: I own nothing involving Full Metal Panic, except the DVD’s I bought ^_^, so anyway yeah. Read the story and I hope you enjoy.

Fox Hunt...

Chapter 5

It was Christmas Eve, Sagara and I were sharing a room in the cabin he had managed to rent in the United States. “It’s going to be cold tonight, and we should keep warm,” I brought a blanket to the couch and wrapped it around us.

“You can always sit next to the fire. I believe that the warmth emitted from the fire should serve you well.” That stupid, melancholy, melodramatic, jerk. Seems like the naive, un-romantic Sousuke was back. Ever since the moment in the closet back in Japan I have felt like telling Sousuke everything, like I needed him to know how I felt.

When he had finally decided to go to sleep I snuck up to his bed and slide under his blanket, snuggling up close to him. Right before I fell into a deep sleep I heard Sousuke mumble, “I care... Kaname.”

Early the next morning I awoke to find Sagara standing outside the room, he was standing outside on the balcony. I crept up behind him, determined to find out what he was looking at, and to tell him how I feel about him. I slid up behind him, I gently slid my arms around him, I hope he liked it.

“What is it Sousuke,” I mumbled as I had my arms around his waist. He gazed out into the morning mist and pointed to the timeless scenery that lay before us. It was so beautiful, the mountain was blanketed with snow, and the green trees poked out of the snow like marshmallows in Hot Coco.

“Ka... Ka... Kaname,” I gazed up into Sousuke‘s eyes, he was stuttering again.

With a gentle voice I answered back to him. “Yeah Sousuke, what is it?”

I noticed he was extremely nervous, sweat was sliding down his face. Cute. “Kaname, I... I...”

“I what Sousuke?” I stared at he nervous wreck known as Sousuke Sagara, hoping that all the attention I was giving him would bring the answer out of him quicker.

“Uh...” Oh no, not the infamous uh‘s.

I became infuriated, but since it was Sousuke I decided to give him another chance, “Uh.... Uh what Sousuke, what are you trying to tell me?”

“Kaname, we have been through hell whether it had involved terrorist or one of my crazy ideas. I have grown to...” His face turned a deep crimson, what in the world could cause Sousuke to blush like that? “I have grown to care for you deeply.”

Did he just say what I think he said, I pinched my cheek to make sure I wasn‘t dreaming. Ouch, yep it‘s real alright. “I can understand if you do not share my feelings, in fact these feelings could compromise the mission.”

A whirlwind of emotions swirled inside my heart, it wasn’t as good as saying he loved me but it was good enough for now. “Sousuke...” I threw my arms around his neck and leapt on him. We had fallen to the wooden floor of the balcony, I hope he hadn’t hit his head, after all what good was damaged goods. “After all this time Sousuke I thought I would be the one saying that first, if you had decided that I was important enough at all.” I paused then raised my body slightly above his. “Sousuke, my little present was meaningless until you’ve said what you’ve said.” I leaned down and now lay on top of him, much like that night I gave him a pre-Christmas present. “Sousuke... Merry Christmas” I was becoming happier and happier by the moment, I pressed my lips against his. I let out a small moan as his hand caressed my bosom.

It was Christmas, and I was pretty sure Sousuke had never had an experience like this before. In a soft, gentle voice Sousuke spoke to me. “Thank you Kaname, thank you for this present, my first Christmas present.” Tears came to my eyes again, this big jerk would make me run dry if he becomes any sweeter.

We stood from our position on the ground. I felt his arms slide under my legs, the other supported my rear as I held onto him for dear life. When he placed me down on the couch inside the room I smiled and whispered, “my little Otaku.”

He had the fire blazing, emitting a soft, orange glow that illuminated the room. Sousuke walked back to me and sat down. I laid my head upon his shoulder. “It’s like a dream. We finally have each other, I don’t care if anyone sees us like this...” I smiled and kissed Sousuke’s cheek, “I’m just so happy right now.”

A soft smile drew across his face, “Kaname for now we must keep this a secret from Mithril.” I nodded and pulled an imaginary zipper across my lips. “I feel free now Kaname.”

Staring at him in disbelief I softly said, “how so?” I leaned in to hear his response, how could he feel so free.

“Because of you Kaname.” He held me tighter, “You helped me become me, helped me to understand all of these emotions swelling up inside of me.” He smiled, “all my feelings for you.”

I blushed hearing these kind words of praise from Sousuke, “I...” I placed my index finger upon his lips, smiling. “Ok,” was all he said, we just sat there staring at each other, together. We sat there holding on to each other for the remainder of the day, love. It was like being at the gates of mortality and Eden, being pulled closer to heaven every moment I spent with Sousuke. In front of that fire place we sat and talked, wrapped in a large wool blanket, but I still wish he would get romantic again.

Score! It was getting close to eight o’clock when Sousuke took me. I will not go into any extreme details, but he finally used the right words to tell me how he felt for me, love, true love. Sousuke had picked me up and placed me on the bed, walking over to the curtains and closing them, also he locked the door to the hallway so no one could just walk in on us. He turned back to me and smiled gently. He cupped my right cheek with his left hand as I listened to his heart beat. I drew circles on his hand then grasped it firmly.

A tear came to my eye as I held his hand, leaning into his chest I began to cry. “Sousuke,” I whispered,” his heart began to race, was his becoming scared that he did something wrong? I kissed him again, hoping that he had gotten my message, “ please stay with me Sousuke, don’t leave me for any more missions.” His facial expression changed from happiness to disbelief, “I know it’s selfish of me, but I don’t want to lose the one man I love,” I began to cry again, feeling so vulnerable and weak, “please...”

He stared into my eyes as he caressed my head, fumbling through my hair. *Crackle* Someone was outside the room, I took quick note of what was happening. Sousuke pulled his Glock 17 out at lightning speed, quietly he strolled over to the door. “What is it,” he told me to be quiet, and to get on the floor on the other side of the bed. Nervously I watched as Sousuke turned the door knob slowly, ever so slowly.

*Crash* “Wh... Wha... What are you all doing here?” I peeked out from behind the bed to see who had interrupted my private time with Sousuke. Shooting up from behind the bed I stomped over to the door balling a fist. Sousuke pointed the gun at the rude interrupters. “Why are you here? State your purpose and then leave before I decide to execute you!”

The romantic moment breakers stood up, dusting themselves off. “Yes Maya, Ren, Kyouko, Kazama, and Kurz. Explain to me what in the hell you are doing outside the door with your ears pressed up against it!!!” I was furious, that may have been the only super romantic moment I may ever have with Sousuke during high school.

Kurz was the first to speak, “well... uh....”

“Damnit Kurz! Spit it out! Your starting to sound like Sousuke!” I couldn’t control my temper, wouldn’t you have done the same thing if you were about to, well you know, make love. At least that’s what I hope it was leading up too.

“Ok... Ok babe,” Sousuke glared at Kurz, sending chills down his spine, “I mean Miss. Chidori. We just wanted to know why Sousuke hadn’t been hurt, flown out a window, blown up, hit through the roof, pinched, burnt, or assaulted all day.”

Sousuke wrapped his arm around me, I blushed. The old Chidori would have hurt him just then but not now, I was to wrapped up in finding out just how much he cared for me. Maya grinned, “not your man eh Kaname?” She jumped back into the hall after Kyouko snapped a few pictures. Sousuke walked into the hall and aimed his pistol in the direction that the annoyances were running off to.

“Bang!” Sousuke fired at them narrowly missing Kyouko, but he hit his mark. Kyouko’s disposible camera had been trashed, no more evidence to hold against us. I smiled at Sousuke and grabbed him by the collar of his shirt. “Ok mister, you owe me a little love.” Pulling him in to the room I closed the door behind me and locked it. I slowly removed his shirt, “this is suppose to be your job you know. The guy is suppose to take the lead.”

He blushed, “Kaname, I have never really done anything like this before. In fact no women have ever really seen my body.”

I smiled at his naivety, he didn’t realize it was my first time as well. He looked down at me and smiled, “Sousuke... what are you thinking?” He blushed, pinning me down on the bed he lifted up my shirt. I let out a soft moan as his hand made contact with my breast. “Sousuke... mmmm... Please be gentle!” What was I talking about, Sousuke was anything but gentle, to my amazement he nodded.

“Kaname, please understand that I have no experience in this field.” I frowned, I understood that but that isn’t what I wanted to hear. “I do lo... lov...” Blushing I couldn’t wait any longer, I wanted him to blurt it out already. “Kaname... I love yo...” I couldn’t wait, I knew what he wanted to say in fact he had said all of it so I rewarded him with a deep kiss.

Unbuttoning my skirt, and my under garments I felt awkward. This man that sits in front of me bears witness to my body and soul, all of me and everything about me. He pinned me down again and kissed my neck as I let out another soft moan.

**

The next morning I woke up next to Sousuke, we were holding onto each other in our purest forms. I kissed his cheek, “Sousuke.”

“................”

No answer, hmmm what now, “SOU-SU-KE!”

“....... Yes Chidori.......” He was awake finally, thank god.

I held him closer to me, I blushed when I noticed his warm breath brush across my bare breast. “Thank you for last night Sousuke,” I whispered into his ear, “I love you...”

Authors Notes~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

If you go back to the ** portion this represents the hentai scene, and if you do want it just send me an E-mail @: Naeole_m@hotmail.com

Just tell me if you want me to post it, other then that I would also need permission to post it on this board, I don’t want to offend any of the younger FMP fans that read these Fan Fics!!

So e-mail me if you want the original chapter with the hentai scene... or somehow manage to get me permission to put the original Chapter up on this board!!

Preview!!!

Hi my name is Kaname Chidori!! I go to Jindai High and is currently involved with Sgt. Sousuke Sagara.... If you don’t know who he is yet, who I am yet, or what the hell I am talking about go and watch Full Metal Panic!! By the way... Why would you read FMP fan fics if you don’t even know what the hell FMP was all about..... GO GET THE SHOW YOU NON FMP WATCHING, BUGS BUNNY LOVING MANIAC!!!

*Sigh* So anyways....

In the next chapter expecta winter time forest fight. Arbalest vs. ??????!!!! Who is this mysterious black AS... Sejiro Sagara... Who the hell is that?? Gauron alive but how?? Kurz video taped Sousuke and I having sex!!!!! Oh I will kill anyone who gets in my way!!!!

Next Chapter of Full Metal Panic: Fox Hunt

Aura to Shroud the Reaper!!!

See you again some time!!
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:lol: Poor Kyouko and her camera! :lol:

Since when did Sousuke stutter...? He doesn't say "uh" that much either. Ah, don't mind me at all. I'm just very critical of Kaname/Sousuke and fanworks in general (this includes mine). :-P

At least they're happy--for now. Hopefully those people aren't at the door listening again. :blush: :twisted:

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Hmmm.... Maybe! Maybe a video camera... Who knows what Mithril does to keep their Soldiers on the right track. Who knows what they use to keep an eye on their soldiers! Plus the whole hentai scene... well it is kinda explicit but with in reason.... I highly doubt Ill end up putting the original chapter on this site, you may need to look up this story on FF.net cause Im thinking of changing the rating to R so I can put the original chapters up cause this is kinda the censored version, I felt nervous about using the original chapters thats why!!!

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:lol: Can't believe they'd videocam those two though... :blush:

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It's Mithril, only Sousuke or Kalinin can stop them.... Hey if Sousuke was under your jurisdiction wouldn't you want to keep an eye on him??

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@ Reaper DXR-7:

Actually, they haven't been watching him well at school at all, and here's he's causing even less trouble, so... :D

If Mardukas gets word of what he's doing here--whoa...:-o

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He thanks for the Idea!!!! Wait until Kurzy tells Tessa who tells... Poor Sousuke... finds the love of his life... Most likely only love, and a Shy little Girl like Tessa manages to rip it away from him to become Hitokiri Batosai!!! :-P

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You're welcome?
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Watch Samurai X or Ruroni Kenshin and you'll understand!!!!

Big Kenshin Fan by the way!! Samurai X is way better then the Kenshin Series though!!!!

So sad ;_;, TOMOE!!!!!! Will Sousuke become the Manslayer of FMP, the Ferry man to the next world, the guiding soul to Nirvana, shall he become the Dread Hitokiri Batosai, the dreaded Man Slayer with the cross shaped scar on his left cheek!!!

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Enjoyable chapter. ;) I waited to read it thinking there may not be moosh - so I went to bed last night and read it this morning. Should have read it last night.

??? Would Tessa be that controlling??? :-o I think she has more style than that...

Yes RK is great - own the series and the manga. But FMP is my fave... :drool: :drool:
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From here on out until the last chapter will be hard core, Action packed, blowing things up, AS vs. AS, stealth, shoot outs!! The works!!

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Preview!!! Preview!!! Read the Preview!!! Arbalest vs. some new AS!! Gauron's back---but who is Sejiro??? I can't wait to get out the next chapter, back to the killing spree and the moosh will be over until maybe chapter.....

Maybe 9----- but it will still have action beyond belief, time to activate the lambda driver, fully functional!! Ok AL blow up this little post!!!

*BOOM, BAM, BIG EXPLOSION, DAMN THAT HURTS, I NEED EXPLOSION WORDS NOW!!!!*

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