The Roof
Jinhai High
Within the confines of the box where a messed up jumble of humanoid hands and legs. Despite the disturbing resemblance to a Hannibal Lector movie, Kyoko could at once see that it was an Arm Slave of a sort, one of those robot thingies that Shinji and Sousake were always talking about... Despite her limited knowledge of arm slaves she knew that this one was totally futuristic and overly modern, with a girth and build more akin to a fit and muscular man, rather than the squat and bulky models she saw on the news or in Shinji’s Books. Also that knife thingie that was locked in it’s mouth seem totally Out to Kyoko. It looked rather like something out of an anime, rather than a real life war machine.
“Ummm, N-NICE!” Squeaked Kyoko. ”She’s gone off the Deep End now…..” She thought to herself.
“Ohh ,really Kyoko?!! Thank You!!!”Chidori gave off a nervous laugh “I was so afraid that the design would be inappropriate? You know? Like a little bit out of context?”
“No, No, Not at all.” Kyoko lied ”I mean ,it really is unique. I’m sure all the Otak-
I mean Others will love it.” “I feel so lousy… Lying to my best friend… again….Thank God it’s only once a year.”
“It fits together!!” Chidori Exclaimed excitedly” 8 feet of towering coffee-fruit cake with Oreo layering ,marzipan armor and a Jello palladium reactor!!!!”
“Really!!!” “Jeez”
“And the Sniper Rifle it carries fires raisins!!!”
"Nooooo..." “NO! Really!!”
At the point Chidori was practically jumping up and down with girlish joy.
“And you know what the best part is!!?”
“What….?”
“It’s Wired!!!!” Chidori squealed, pulling back the drop cloth to reveal a control panel and mechatronic scaffolding. Along with 20 feet of wire, fuses and assorted electronics.
“152 points of Articulation!!! She chirped “More than a spider-man figurine!!!”
Kyoko Swooned.“It’s a Nightmare!!!”
“It’s Marvelous Chidori!!!”
“I’m going to tell her, I’m Going to tell her Now!!! She has to know!! Even If I can’t screw up courage for myself!! ….I’ve Got to do it for her sake!!!
“Say Chidori…” Kyoko Ventured.
“Yes Kyoko!!” She jerked towards her with a gleam in her eye. ”I’m so happy Kyoko!! I know that this year I’m gonna Synch it!! WOOOOHOOOO!!!!!!”
“….Where do you thing Sousake went?” she blurted” Next Year, definitely next year, I’ll catch her before the contest and force her to tell me what’s she’s making…..””Didn’t he tell you where he was going before he left?, It’s so unlike him to leave without at least informing you first..”
“This is all his Fault…Definitely his influence at work here…”
Upon hearing his name Chidori’s mood dampened immediately and visibility
“Oh that idiot….He used to let me know, or at least get someone to send a message to me..”She signed “He’s not answering his cell phone…”
“Maybe he’s finally sick of me” Chidori mumbled sadly to herself.
“What was that?” Kyoko asked.
“Oh, err, Let’s set up!” ]
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If my fanfic rubs against your skin in any way pls feel free to point out any faults.
It will continue to suck only as long as nobode corrects my mistakes or points out my limitations.
For the sake of future viewers of my fanfic pls refaim from sparing my pride and dignity as i have none.As a electronic entity I am totally anonmynous and can take any thing you throw at me.Even comments on my spelling and grammer.
Not are of us are good writers,
but on the other hand ,everyone who bothers to come to this forum is definately a good READER.
You know what you like.
Share it with the less fortunate
Stuck again.
Roadblock.
If my fanfic rubs against your skin in any way pls feel free to point out any faults.
It will continue to suck only as long as nobode corrects my mistakes or points out my limitations.
For the sake of future viewers of my fanfic pls refaim from sparing my pride and dignity as i have none.As a electronic entity I am totally anonmynous and can take any thing you throw at me.Even comments on my spelling and grammer.
Not are of us are good writers,
but on the other hand ,everyone who bothers to come to this forum is definately a good READER.
You know what you like.
Share it with the less fortunate
If my fanfic rubs against your skin in any way pls feel free to point out any faults.
It will continue to suck only as long as nobode corrects my mistakes or points out my limitations.
For the sake of future viewers of my fanfic pls refaim from sparing my pride and dignity as i have none.As a electronic entity I am totally anonmynous and can take any thing you throw at me.Even comments on my spelling and grammer.
Not are of us are good writers,
but on the other hand ,everyone who bothers to come to this forum is definately a good READER.
You know what you like.
Share it with the less fortunate
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interesting
moderate in vaule
but since we all know the characters and the setting i guess describing is not really nessicary.
the plot is okay
i will say more later
moderate in vaule
but since we all know the characters and the setting i guess describing is not really nessicary.
the plot is okay
i will say more later
Violence is not the answer....duct tape is.
The library is my base of operations
"You could be crazy drunk, tripping balls on mushrooms, getting a bj and still beat Oblivion on very easy."
"It couldn't have been me, I'm too busy building probes."
The library is my base of operations
"You could be crazy drunk, tripping balls on mushrooms, getting a bj and still beat Oblivion on very easy."
"It couldn't have been me, I'm too busy building probes."
Gahhhh.
Sorry, I've been offline for so damn long.I just can't juggle too many things at a time.Currently it's 1225am Pacific time and I am craming for my "Electrical" Physics Test tomorrow which will consitute 15% of my grade.My exams will be over soon and I promise to finish off this bloody fanfiction even if i burn out and SNAP><