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[FanArt]First try at 'wallpapering'
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 1:33 pm
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
This is my first ever wallpaper.
Don't laugh now...
And oh, yea. for those who like neat and clean, warning:
it's cluttered. really.
http://thetaskforce.hopto.org/db/fanart ... 4-50-1.jpg
I didn't know what to do with it, so I uploaded it to the taskforce...
It's only in one size. 1024 x 768...
Comments?
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 1:39 pm
by Avlor
Good job. The scattered photo effect it nice.
The only thing I could suggest is soften/smooth the edges of some of the pix (i.e. the center one) - the sharp/jagged edges distract a little from the cool over all effect.
Av
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 1:44 pm
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
thanks for info.
must note that: smoothe edges.
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 5:16 pm
by Taurec
nice try ...
there is a small flaw in the FMP logo .. the "metal panels" are showing..
Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 5:33 am
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
Yeah. I wanted the 3d look...
Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 8:01 am
by HELLFIRE
Like it... tho the mix of illustration and anime art is a bit jarring
Regards
Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 8:13 am
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
Umm.. ok.
thanks...
Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 4:34 pm
by Andrei Burnside
Nice. For a first shot, that's entirely better than what I could do. It's cluttered as you said, but you could improve it a little, by maybe making the background some kind of wood grain...Like a desk. With the FMP logo as some kind of nametag...It might look stupid, but I think it'd look pretty cool. Good Wallpaper. *saves*.
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 3:10 am
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
Difficult.
Gotta look through some photoshop tutorial and the manuals...
Was just experimenting...
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:32 am
by Teletha Testarosa
Interesting, I liked the way you made souske looking one way and kaname the other
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:34 am
by Eidolon
Overall the image is very good, and very good use of the "scattered image" design.
Only things to improve on:
- focus on 1 of the animes or the art
- soften jaggies on middle pic ( >>antialiasing<< )
- maybe make dropoff on FMP logo at top all in same direction
Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 5:35 am
by Sgt. Sagara Sousuke
thanks...
Still got some stuff fixed...
