[FIC] Dinner and Dessert Part 3 of 4 (edited version)

Post by **Taurec** » Wed Jun 04, 2003 5:28 pm

Well i did find it rather refreshing that you used a neutral word for
euh "Little Sousuke" .

unlike the usual stuff you see in these type of stories .....

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 12:05 am

...I don't even want to know

blackrose · Post by **blackrose** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 5:08 am

Taurec wrote:Well i did find it rather refreshing that you used a neutral word for
euh "Little Sousuke" .

unlike the usual stuff you see in these type of stories .....

*snerk* You didn't like the example I gave? "Womanmaker" was a new one for me. It didn't even occur to me at first what they were talking about in the fic. I was like huh?

I tend to prefer neutral words for male genitalia. I have a friend who uses very scientific, biologically correct terminology. That doesn't work for me any more than "gigglestick" "womanmaker" and then some words that aren't laughable, just up-chuckable. -___-

*hugs Hellfire* No, dear, you really don't want to know.

Love,
Rose

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 5:22 am

Well, let's see, what interesting names for male genitelia have we
come across so far:

Main Unit
__-Junior
Little ____
Gigglestick -- well, I'm not giggling there

Womanmaker -- must be the PC in me that kinda doesn't like this one

Regards blackrose :hugs back:

Gabb · Post by **Gabb** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 7:37 am

I for one found the chapter to be of interest and can't really understand how people could feel uncomfortable with it

humans are funny creatures with powerful urges

deal with it

Post by **Taurec** » Thu Jun 05, 2003 7:52 am

Rose honey ... i know i tend to speak in riddles .. but i was giving you a compliment there ...
All chapters so far are very likeable. making me want to read the next one..

anything is better then "purple tipped lance" imho

the Forzamilan welcome can proceed here
http://www.sphere-zero.net/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=661

Gauss_chan · Post by **Gauss_chan** » Fri Jun 06, 2003 8:13 am

Me likes!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

And now if you excuse me, following Taus example, I will take a very very cold bath.

Post by **Taurec** » Sat Jun 14, 2003 10:20 pm

*bumpie die bump*

Rosie ... could you give us a tinsy winsy little sneaky peaky ....
i think Gauss_chan is dissolving ...

@HellFire ... you left out "Pulsating Manhood"
if you don't mind .. i'm gonna wash my mouth with soap now.....

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Sat Jun 14, 2003 10:22 pm

@Taurec
...I'll buy the factory with ya *ergh!*

Katyusha · Post by **Katyusha** » Sun Jun 15, 2003 3:15 am

Be my guest. £32 Million please. The Katyusha Soap Factory isn't making all that much money. Heck, it barely pays for itself....

blackrose · Post by **blackrose** » Wed Jun 25, 2003 3:02 pm

Taurec wrote: Rosie ... could you give us a tinsy winsy little sneaky peaky .... i think Gauss_chan is dissolving ...

TAU! *glomps* Sorry, my love-bunny, I kept thinking my beta MIGHT SOMEDAY finish beta-ing, but things have been a teensy bit hectic for her again. But! Theoretically, she's finished running her renaissance fair, now, and back on the job.

In the meantime, in between time....

"Sousuke…"

He stood, frozen to the spot. She crawled towards the side of the bed.

"Do you have to go?"

"Yes. I have to be at the rendezvous point in—"

With one hand securing the comforter around her waist, she stretched up and took his arm, pulling him towards the bed.

He kneeled down onto the edge of the mattress. "An hour."

She smiled and let go of the covers. They fell to her knees as she cupped his face and pressed her lips to his. He kissed her back; her soft mouth yielded easily to his harder assault. She pulled away. "Then you don't have to go yet." Kaname smiled; her soft, brown eyes met his gaze and pulled him in.

The next thing he knew, his t-shirt was gone and she was beneath him, her arms wrapped tightly around his shoulders, her soft skin melting into his....

@HellFire ... you left out "Pulsating Manhood"
if you don't mind .. i'm gonna wash my mouth with soap now.....

LMAO! This brings to mind... Does anyone else remember I think it was Naked Gun 33 1/3 where they have to evacuate this lecture hall, or at least an auditorium where some guy is giving this really really dull lecture, and everyone is asleep. So, Leslie Neilson gives the guy a romance novel to start reading aloud, and everyone like instantly wakes up.

It was suuuuuch a bad passage. Something about a "purple headed warrior" and "her quivering mound of love-pudding". I about died, and the wording, for some reason, just...it's been lodged all this time in the back recesses of my head.... So, just thought I would share.

*hugs*

Love,
Rose <--who's off to catch up on Hellfire's fic

Katyusha · Post by **Katyusha** » Wed Jun 25, 2003 5:40 pm

I thought that was Naked Gun 2 1/2. Then again, I don't keep good track of movies.

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Thu Jun 26, 2003 12:47 am

W/B again Rose. Look forward to #4

Regards

ZyreX · Post by **ZyreX** » Thu Jun 26, 2003 6:13 am

I haven't read a singel one!!
Ill wait untill 4 has arrived then ill read them all!!
More interesting that way

Blackrose: Idiot you should read them now
ZyreX: but.. but
Blackrose: no BUTS!! read!!
ZyreX: SORRY!! will start right away.....not

Blackrose: Read or ill hug ya

ZyreX"starts reading"
Blackrose: Ill hug ya anyway
ZyreX: NOOO!!
*Hears bones breaking* *CrAcK*