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argh....... *w22980 hits head against wall to get rid of song!!!*
Right.... sorry.....Kashim wrote:damnit!! yer all distractin dd from writing!! *quickly runs around dd in a cricle, wrapping him in do-not cross tape*
But it's SOOOO Tempting... (& what what trap can't a kitsune weasle her way out of?)terran empire wrote:NO AV DONT DO IT IT'S A TRAP!!!
an evil evil trap
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NOW, I can't write..... ( grumble grumble grumble )damnit!! yer all distractin dd from writing!! *quickly runs around dd in a cricle, wrapping him in do-not cross tape*
No prob.Right.... sorry.....
Uh huh.either that or I'll threaten to ask Jae to make the above pic his avitar if he doesn't get us a new chapter
...NO. Don't try to speak for ALL of us. Some of us keep our bloody mouths shut, comment once and awhile, and don't seem like f-ing worshippers at the temple! (Get a grip people).woman22980 wrote:
Kashim really does have it right as far as the "forbidden fruit dipped in dark chocolate" part goes, so you'll have to forgive us all our anticipation.
Good point.Got a statement for ya dd. If sousuke was fighting the Soviets...he most definitely wouldn't use the term comrade
That is true to canon, to a degree. It's fun to write at times, and is my take on things in some stories. I have no prob with fics that have it or not. I admittedly go overboard with it in some stories, but it depends on what my goals for the story are. I'm kind of halisened-out at the moment.for dd's fics, she would have snapped when he started usually
A good point and a bad point at the same time. 'All of us' probably meant 'all of us who are caught up in the story and like all the moosh parts.' In that sense they're correct. If it meant 'EVERYBODY,' then they were wrong. But, I don't think they meant to speak for eveybody per se....NO. Don't try to speak for ALL of us. Some of us keep our bloody mouths shut, comment once and awhile, and don't seem like f-ing worshippers at the temple! (Get a grip people).
I will focus in on that point without trying to be inflammatory. That is the other side of the coin that pisses you off. It's essentially saying 'You ALL should behave this way instead.'Get a grip people
Considering you weren't even a PART of the discussion on this thread until that rather rude and abusive comment, I think you were doing better keeping your "bloody mouth shut", as you said, in the first place. My comment was meant to include the other people who have been participating in this discussion who are obviously interested in dd writing lemon, and that's it. Honestly it seems to be either arrogant presumption or trolling that you would even think you were included in my comment about "all of us." Trust me, you were not.Andrei Burnside wrote:...NO. Don't try to speak for ALL of us. Some of us keep our bloody mouths shut, comment once and awhile, and don't seem like f-ing worshippers at the temple! (Get a grip people).
With this comment in mind. I will reply.For life is quite absurd,
And death's the final word.
You must always face the curtain with a bow!
Forget about your sin -- give the audience a grin,
Enjoy it -- it's the last chance anyhow!
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). Setting is basically there from images taken from the series and life itself so that base is covered (when it isn't you manage to do fine). The beginning certainly had seeds of finality in it, but you didn't show your hand too early either. Your style is minimalist at times (that isn't a bad thing) and you manage to communicate ALOT without getting too flashy, and that's a good aspect of your style. I know it may seem stupid trying to apply fanfiction to Technique in Fiction...but it helps me in making reasonable reviews...and hopefully allows you some more literary input. ...Do you really want to know? JK. I dunno man. I don't bash everything you like, hell I don't bash much of the stuff you like at all. I'm somewhat offended by the comment. I try not to be the asshole/knowitall. I'll try to keep inflamatory comments to a minimum. You need to lay off ad homonym. Considering you weren't even a PART of the discussion on this thread until that rather rude and abusive comment, I think you were doing better keeping your "bloody mouth shut", as you said, in the first place.
I consider most of what you said legit. But one CAN lurk. I simply voiced my opposition to a lemon by dd. If he wishes to do so...that's his perogative, his style, his story (I'd NEVER do a KW/MM Lemon). But this is Sousuke and Kaname.Honestly it seems to be either arrogant presumption or trolling that you would even think you were included in my comment about "all of us."
Anything.Whaddya want dd? One of the archangels from the book Enoch as your persona? Or a balrog?
.Know it may seem stupid trying to apply fanfiction to Technique in Fiction...but it helps me in making reasonable reviews...and hopefully allows you some more literary input
Nothing wrong with putting it that way. I don't usually write that way, and it's a matter of there often being more value in what is implied than what is described in detail. But, there would be room for some of that (to my level of comfort) in a story about learning and exploration. Some people may end up thinking it's too much... others may think it's too little.I simply voiced my opposition to a lemon by dd
That's a judgment thing. What may just be confrontational to you might be an insult to someone else.I was a little too confrontational, and people took it WAY too seriously
I know what you're trying to say. But to someone else it would be a slap in the face. If someone slapped you in the face, what reaction would be be taking it too seriously? If someone kicked you in the balls and you decided to slug him, would it be over-reacting if you turned around andslugges him good?don't seem like f-ing worshippers at the temple! (Get a grip people).
That's a bummer! I personally hate it when I reach stretches where I really feel like writing, but nothing comes. That, or having some ideas, but no urge to write. So far, for me, the slow times have been few and far between. But, never know when any writer might say 'That's it. Got too much other stuff to do. It was fun....'As for people writing. It's hard man. In IB they suck you dry of any creativity
You quote something about enjoying life and yet before were degrading us for doing exactly that.Andrei Burnside wrote:With this comment in mind. I will reply.For life is quite absurd,
And death's the final word.
You must always face the curtain with a bow!
Forget about your sin -- give the audience a grin,
Enjoy it -- it's the last chance anyhow!
Look, if you know all that then what possessed you to comment in the first place? Where is it your position to put a stopper on "ridiculous" fun? Let me point out again that you said this first "Some of us keep our bloody mouths shut" It's not like anyone is forcing you to read the rest of the thread beyond the fanfic, so what does it matter to you what we do??? It shouldn't - you don't like the play, stop reading, there's nothing else to be said.Andrei Burnside wrote:I was somewhat out of line in regards to pissing everybody off...but it was gettng somewhat ridiculous in my opinion (which means little here [not a crack against anyone] When you chide people for having "fun" they might get pissed.
That's true, and for that I apologize. I could have said the same thing with a different context. No excuses, but a reason - I was (and still am) completely pissed that you would think it your place to put myself and others down for having fun. I also find it completely offensive that you would assume that I was referring to "all of us" as including you, when you hadn't posted a SINGLE time in the thread prior to you "shooting your mouth off".Andrei Burnside wrote:If I'm guilty of trolling...you're guilty of flaming
NO, you did NOT just "simply voice your opposition." Voicing your opposition would have been something like "I don't think that FMP should have sex scenes because -whatever reason-." You cannot just come back and say you weren't serious, that you didn't really mean what you said. There is NOTHING in your first post to indicate anything BUT utter seriousness, and you even say that "Frankly...I don't like to screw around." so you'll understand if I find the ways of interpreting your comments rather few in number.Andrei Burnside wrote:I consider most of what you said legit. But one CAN lurk. I simply voiced my opposition to a lemon by dd.
No, overreacting would be calling people playing around "f-ing worshippers at a temple." and implying that they should be the ones to "keep their bloody mouths shut." I AM thoroughly pissed though. In all seriousness and no maliciousness, can you see why I would be pissed? What good does it do anyone to insult people by saying they're being sycophantic? dd didn't seem to mind, and I don't think any of us really worship at his temple, so what does it matter? Just because you don't like to play around, don't ruin it for the rest of us. All you had to do was leave your comments on his story and be done with it, so you'll forgive me for saying before that "you were doing better keeping your "bloody mouth shut" in the first place." and thinking it appropriate you follow your own words of admonition, instead of trying to make us conform to what you wanted.Andrei Burnside wrote:I shot my mouth off, and you've overreacted.
Eh, no rush, I actually just finished the Sousuke carrying Kaname to the hospital picture! Yay!!! The links and information on making the picture are in the illustration thread (or will be shortly...) I hope it does lift your spirits, I'm pretty happy with it overall, I don't know if an artist can ever be totally happy with their work, you're always finding the flaws! but I like it enough to let it be freedd wrote:Of course, some artwork might lift my spirits ( don't rush yourself! )
