build-a-fic!

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:29 pm

oookay!!do you guys know what a build fic is? in my homelands, far in the depths of the deleted past, my fic writing friends and I decided to make a fic where everyone on the forum could post part of the story! the storyline can really go any which way, depending on what you write and post into it!! just a few obvious rules. heavy things cannot fall out of the sky and kill any main characters, etc, etc. ya know, stupid stuff like that.
also, if male character A has been showing affection for female character A and ignoring female character B, male character A cannot just turn around start making out with female character B, okay? just use common sense. ill get the story started, then you all can carry it on, post by post!

Heavy breathing and footsteps were following close behind him. He wasn't going to make it! He started to break into a sprint, but realized that she was falling behind.

"Go on without me, Sousuke!" Kaname called out between breaths.

"Negative." Sousuke said, barely breathing hard at all. He swiped Kaname's legs out from under her and caught her as she fell into his arms. The two of them could NOT afford to be late again.Sousuke was'nt expecting to be assaulted in repsonse.+

"WATCH WHAT YOUR GRABBING" Kaname swiftly brought the halisen onto Sousuke's head as he carried them both to Jindai High at an incredible speed. Secretly, Kaname was enthralled to be so close to sousuke, but he didnt need to know that. Not yet.

As Sousuke sped to their first hour class, he realized that Kaname was snuggling closer to him. He blushed, and tried to shake such thoughts from his mind.

"Sousuke?" Kaname looked up at him innocently, "is something wrong?"

"Negative." Sousuke responded."Wait, cancel that. Affirmative, something is wrong." Kaname looked up at her protector, afraid he didnt like to be so close to her. Kaname's fears dissentigrated as Sousuke continued. "The bell has rung. We are late, again." Kaname had been so caught up in her thoughts she hadnt realized.

tiptoe39 · Post by **tiptoe39** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 2:45 pm

Her embarrassment quickly turned to anger. "Why didn't you tell me BEFORE the bell rang?" she fumed, whipping out the infamous halisen and taking a whack.

But for once in his life, Sousuke was ready. He whirled and reached out one well-trained hand. To Kaname's utter shock, he stopped the halisen in its path.

Kaname gaped. "Yo... you're not supposed to do that!" she stammered.

"Chidori." Sousuke's tone was serious. All of a sudden, their being late for class was no longer an issue worth discussing. Kaname lowered the halisen and gulped.

"I have something to tell you."

...to be continued!...

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KiLlEr · Post by **KiLlEr** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 3:57 pm

Kaname held her breath as her stomach filled with butterflies.

'What is wrong with me?', she thought, 'why am I so nervouse all the sudden?'

Whether it was excitment or dread, she couldn't tell.

"Wha.. what is it Souske?", bearly keeping her voice from quivering.

"uh.."

"Sousuke?"

"uh..."

"Well??", her temper began to fight its way through her.

.... to be continued ....

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 6:05 pm

OT, but...

There is is GROUPFIC we tried once -- again, use search to find it

Regards