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]*hugs Gauss_chan* Thank you! I think you're far too generous, but I'm glad you liked it.Gauss_chan wrote:Blackrose sama is the greatest fanfic writer ever.
BANZAI! BANZAI! BANZAI!
Hugs Blackrose.
It was great!
Nah, Stella's been a terribly good sport of late. I've been busy writing on quite a number of different things, and she's been keeping up fairly well. I just like to pick on her is all. 
...is reduced to permanently walking around with his jaw unhingedblackrose wrote: He took her wrists and pulled them down and away. Her head bowed further, obstructing his view of her face. But why was she hiding? Was she embarrassed?
"It's okay. I have seen—" He stopped. Wait. Kaname didn't seem to like it when another woman had his attention – for any reason. "Never mind." She turned her head to look at him, and he leaned close to kiss her neck, careful not to touch her newly exposed chest.
"Sousuke?"
"Kaname…." His hands found her waist again and his mouth trailed down to her shoulder. His hands itched to touch her, but he knew from past experience, Kaname's chest was off-limits without permission.
Well, if you have to mark it 'lemon' 'explicit' or 'adult' (or whatever), I'd feel better if it weren't directly posted. Linking is perfectly fine...blackrose wrote:So how much is allowed/not allowed on the board, anyway?
Now what'd I do to deserve that, Taurec? And I do recall yourTaurec wrote:*hands Hellfire a napkin, And Steps on his tongue*
Well considering he was giving her mouth to mouth and not a real kiss, yeah I could see why he was such a bad kisser. Might not have knocked her socks off, just took her breath awayTaurec wrote:Just a little thought, .. was Sousuke such a bad kisser ??
I mean, didn't sousuke knock Mizuki of her socks. .. .
(well he was the who got knocked in the end <g> )
*snickers*Taurec wrote:Well as long as you don't give a indepth description.. how sousuke would *oink,oink* his *Honk,Honk* into Kaname's *Bleep, Bleep* ... and they would be *Tuut,Tuut* like a bunch of *Taaat, Taaat* i think it will be ok.
*wink* Sure, sarge, take it all off.Taurec wrote:btw .... can i get out of those cutout leather pants you made me wear ?? .. it's getting a little cold ...
*giggles* It must be Kaname's chest. Has to be...Hellfire wrote:...is reduced to permanently walking around with his jaw unhinged and his tounge sticking out perpetually drooling....
NP, Jae. We've already had this discussion and you know I'm happy to abide by your rules. My 'lemon' turned out rather milder than I thought, so I was just wondering specifics, but I've got a fairly easy edit where I can post most of the chapter, sans lemon-flavored parts, and just link to those. *hugs* Thanks!Jae wrote:Well, if you have to mark it 'lemon' 'explicit' or 'adult' (or whatever), I'd feel better if it weren't directly posted. Linking is perfectly fine...
I am. Somehow, the board must not have seen when I clicked on a link from my alert-y thing, because I didn't get any of them this weekend.Jae wrote:And blackrose (if you're still reading <g>)
So, I just came by to see what was going on in FMP land, and went ACK! More responses! lol
Thank you. I sincerely appreciate that assessment. It's my first time writing them, and so it's been a bit of an experiment. The only real criticism I've gotten from my beta has been that Kaname seemed a bit unsure for Kaname, and my take on her was more yours - some of that is a shell. As seen in her more private moments away from school.Jae wrote:A comment you made on your characteraztion of Kaname- I think you've got her. Some Kaname psychology....she's aggressive in external situations (possibly part natural, but some definate shell-ing going on), but is really a private and withdrawn person. Romantically she's not just inexperienced, but she's shy and passive, so I think that writing her like that is pretty much dead on <g>
I just wish we could have gotten a kiss. ONE kiss! Is that too much to ask? Geez, I swear. These shounen animes kill me.... *sigh*Jae wrote:From a psych. POV, the author has done a really good job at providing why they take so damn long to get together.
Hey! The lone strategic location for defense was her bed! That wasn't cassanova-ish enough? I mean, how close is Sousuke really going to get to being Cassanova? As far as I could guess, the remark about the bed and sweeping her off her feet was about as far as the boy could go.Taurec wrote:Just a little thought, .. was Sousuke such a bad kisser ??
I mean, didn't sousuke knock Mizuki of her socks. .. .
You still have time to turn sousuke into a cassanova <eg>
*giggles* I can't resist.Hellfire wrote:...looks forward to what blackrose will do to Souske
*glomps Beck* HEYA! And yeah, *giggles* I took it as he was giving her mouth-to-mouth resucitation, too. Considering his remarks about 'kissing' soldiers on the field of battle. *pats Sousuke on the head* You've come a loooooong way, dear. Now, strip down and go jump in the bed with Kaname.Beckster wrote:Well considering he was giving her mouth to mouth and not a real kiss, yeah I could see why he was such a bad kisser. Might not have knocked her socks off, just took her breath away
*scratches head* you seem vaguely familiar. Ummmmm, why did the unromantic gun bunny come back to this thread? THERE'S ROMANCE IN HERE! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! It might...STICK on you or something, so you should probably go back to your Hate Gauln thread where's there's lots of blood and killing...things.Katyusha wrote:Either that, or he flooded her lungs.
nahhh, I'm braindead... between school, no sleep, and the pressure(s)blackrose wrote:*giggles* It must be Kaname's chest. Has to be...
Somehow, I just can't picture a TOTAL hentai
The one at the end of Love Hina Again enough for you?blackrose wrote:I just wish we could have gotten a kiss. ONE kiss! Is that too much to ask? Geez, I swear. These shounen animes kill me.... *sigh*
I had fun killing.... things... in that thread *LOL*blackrose wrote:so you should probably go back to your Hate Gauln thread where's there's lots of blood and killing...things.
