[FIC] Black Rain: Another Whispered

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[FIC] Black Rain: Another Whispered

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Black Rain

By: Reaper DRX-7

Discloser: I do not own anything regarding the series, or many products in the Full Metal Panic franchise.

“Black Rain is a mission with severe losses, I guess you could say Helmajestan was a Black Rain for I was the only survivor.”

Chapter 3: Another Whispered

November 19, 2007 0500 Hours

“Kaname, I’m sorry but I have to leave.” Sousuke leant in towards Kaname’s face, “a war in America has broken out, and I have to leave.” He kissed her cheek and wiped away her tears, “I love you Kaname, but I may never see you again. Please just forget me, move on. Goodbye..”

With tears in her eyes Kaname desperately chased after Sousuke, his silhouette fading into the darkness. “Please Sousuke, don’t go. You promised you would stay with me.” Kaname tripped on something she could not make out, bringing her knees to her chest, she cried her heart out. “Sousuke, I love you. Don’t go...”

“Well Missy,” Kaname glanced up from her feeble position, only she was greeted by none other than Gauron, “looks like sonny can’t save you now, so how about I give you a hug.” He pulled out his gun and pointed it strait at Kaname’s face, “who will save you now Miss Chidori! HAHAHAHA!” Bang’ Bang...

“SOUSUKE!” Kaname awoke to a gently warmth, Sousuke hadn’t left her, “thank god it was only a dream.” Although it was only a dream it still shook her up. After reviewing the situation all Kaname wanted was for Sousuke to hold her forever. She snuggled into Sousuke’s embrace, and with a slight smile she closed her eyes, dreaming of the sweet, tender moments that she shared with Sousuke just the other day.

Sousuke woke up as Kaname snuggled into his chest, the increase in warmth upset his sleeping balance, and of course with Kaname there the whole night he was pretty much of balance. “You know, I always thought you would die before you ever fell in love Sousuke.” He recognized the voice; it was Mao’s.

“Sgt. Major, why are you here?”

“To keep you from sleeping with the mission objective but I guess I was too late for that.” Sousuke became instantly embarrassed, “you know about Tessa right?”

“Yes, of course. Before I left Kurtz was telling me that I am obligated to attend her funeral.” He glanced over to the ceiling, “for some reason, I know she is not dead.”

“The analysis on your mother is complete Sousuke,” Mao noticed Sousuke was trying not to listen, “I want you to hear this.” He finally acknowledged Mao, looking strait into her eyes she finally told him, “Your Mother, she is a whispered.” Sousuke’s eyes widened.

“What?”

“Strangest part is that, well, you have two sisters, and only one had died.” Sousuke darted up, waking Kaname from her deep sleep. “One sister is alive...”

“Who is she?”

“Well, she is only your half sister. Your sister is...” She smiled at Kaname then glanced back at Sousuke, “our dear little Captain.”

Sousuke darted to a standing position, “you must be joking, and she can’t be my sister. I won’t believe it, but... Maybe... My mother left Gau... I mean father after she found out some secret that he kept from all of us.”

Kaname began to smile; “well looks like I won don’t it?” Just then she wished that she had never said that, looking from Mao to Sousuke. The two just stared at the floor then at each other, “um, Sousuke. What’s wrong with you?”

“Kaname, I never told you the other news that was given to me by Kalinin.”

She stared at Sousuke; his eyes were empty pools of melancholy. “What was the other news?”

“Kaname, as of yesterday Tessa was pronounced missing in action. We don’t know if she is dead.” He gazed strait into Kaname’s eyes, noticing the tears. “Kaname, it is highly unlikely that Miss Captain survived the explosion of the Tuatha de Daanan Mark 2.” Kaname gasped and fell into Sousuke’s arms.

“But, she was my friend Sousuke, even though we fought for you we were still friends.” Sousuke gently caressed Kaname’s hair, “why, why Sousuke.”

“I don’t think she is dead Kaname.” She gazed into Sousuke’s eyes; something there seemed to comfort her. “Somehow she is alive, I can feel her...” Kaname smiled, she never thought Sousuke could become so caring, and in touch with the people around him. Sousuke turned towards Mao just to see a smile stretching from ear to ear.

“Well Sgt. Sagara, are you finally coming to terms with your past, or are you just making a guess?”

Sousuke smirked, “maybe just a little of both.” They all laughed; Kaname gazed into Sousuke’s gray eyes wondering how this pessimistic soldier could find so many ways to make her feel better about life. “Hey Mao, could you do me a favor?”

“Sure, what.”

Sousuke glanced down at Kaname and smiled, “well... Could you leave please?” Kaname grinned at Sousuke, then at Mao.

“Yea, can you leave Mao?” Mao shook it off and smiled, standing up she turned back towards the happy couple.

“Hey you two, don’t forget to use a condom...” Sousuke and Kaname flushed red; they glanced at each other then their surroundings. They grinned and grabbed anything they could and hurled the objects at Melissa. “Hey you two, ouch, I was just... Ouch... Kidding!” Kaname and Sousuke smiled and halted their assault, “I get the picture you two. You want some alone time.” The couple nodded, Mao realizing that she had just lost this battle shrugged it off and went for the door; then it opened.

“Going somewhere Miss?” A gunshot shattered the peaceful bliss between Sousuke and Kaname. Sousuke pushed Kaname behind the couch and signaled her to move to the other room. She nodded and slowly crept into the bedroom, looking back she saw Sousuke pull out his pistol and creep up to the hallway Melissa was just.

Kaname frowned and said in her mind, ‘be careful Sousuke.’

‘I will Kaname.’ Shock finally hit them, had they communicated telepathically? They glanced at each other but then quickly shrugged it off, ‘shit, I must be imagining things. She can’t hear my thoughts just as much as I can not hear hers.’ He took one final look to see if Kaname had safely made it into the other room, seeing that she did he lunged into the hall. What he saw was Melissa Mao on the ground, a wound in her right shoulder, left leg, and right arm.

“Well Kashime, looks like it’s just son and Pops now, but say, how bout your girlfriend join us.” Sousuke was baffled at Gauron’s mention of Kaname, ‘how could he get her, she is gone. I told her to leave out the back.’ Just then he heard something faint, almost silent. There was no noise, but Sousuke was sure he heard it.

‘Help me Sousuke!’ He finally realized what happened, he was hearing Kaname.

‘Wait, but I’m not a whispered, how can I hear her.’ He glanced at Gauron, holding his pistol at eye level, ready to fire at any time.

“On the contrary son, you are indeed a whispered but, you are not like Kaname or Miss Tesstarossa, you are a new breed, just like I.” Gauron grinned at Sousuke, ‘an face it son, this game just got a whole lot more interesting.’

‘So I guess I am a whispered, I guess having a father and mother who are whispered increased my chances of becoming one. But why are these powers only surfacing now, why not when I needed them?’

‘Sousuke,’ the young soldier looked around but no one was there. ‘Sousuke, your powers. Your powers are not the same, you needed to find happiness to achieve your ability to access your powers.’

‘Who are you?’

‘Sousuke, don’t you recognize my voice?’ The young Sergeant glanced around, looking for the source of the voice.

‘No!’

‘Sousuke, it’s your mother...’

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:shock:

uh-oh... Sousuke + Gaulun + close quaters = REALLY bad news...
I don't think the homeowners insurance policy'll cover this...

Lots of hook all over the place Reaper, but I'm waiting to see what'll
happen next






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Oh well I guess since no one likes this fic I'm going to have to discontinue this project, *sigh* say goodbye to this fic ---------

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Give up that fast ? i didn't hear the fat lady sing ?
it's been a little short before anyone could jump to conclusions...
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"Can I help you?, "you know this section is.." she broke off her sentence as the man walked towards her and nodded, "I think you can Captain".
Tessa looked down, "I haven't been called Captain in 4 years," Wha..what do you want?"
He gave her a devious grin, "I'm here to make sure you keep your promise."
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well the reason is that I am currently in the process of writing a new story that runs along the same path but just not as rocky, gives you time to adjust and it isn't so rushed. I know the ideas where there but everyting else was not....

I'm posting my new story soon, very soon, maybe in 10 minutes or 20...

I hope this next one is better, *kneels and puts hands in the air* PLEASE GOD OF FANFICTION WRITING MAKE MY NEXT STORY BETTER, OH AND MAKE SURE IT'S THE FULL METAL PANIC ONE AND NOT THE ZOIDS ONE, ON SECOND THOUGHT MAKE ALL MY WRITINGS BETTER, THANKS ALOT... WAIT NOTHING HAPPENED YET, THANKS IF IT HAPPENS, IF IT DOESN'T IT PROVES I PRAYED TO THE WRONG GOD!!!

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It's up

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