Interesting, but is it legal?

MegaDaffy · Post by **MegaDaffy** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:01 am

I have another story idea! This one will be a horror (maybe slasher) story.

Sousuke goes insane one night and goes on a rampage, Only Kaname and Sousuke's teammates can stop him.

"So why don't you start it already?" You might ask. well here's why, I (once again) am trying to base it on this 1995 Horror game shown here http://www.mobygames.com/game/saturn/d without ripping it off.

Any Ideas? Anyone?

SOULS_LEADER · Post by **SOULS_LEADER** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:07 am

If and only if Sousuke Dies!!! BWHAHAHAHAHA no seriously cool idea

full_metal_sousuke · Post by **full_metal_sousuke** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:11 am

only if sousuke and kaname get together in the end. or just do whatever u want to do

SOULS_LEADER · Post by **SOULS_LEADER** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:12 am

Kill them both!!! Bwahahahahah

XD jk

HELLFIRE · Post by **HELLFIRE** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:37 am

...Sousuke, a few too many games of Zombies, a couple liberal servings
of energy drinks and no food....

Write away MegaDuffy!

Regards

MegaDaffy · Post by **MegaDaffy** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 5:44 am

You guys checked out the link I posted, right?
@Souls Leader: I get the feeling you that you don't particularly like Sousuke or Kaname do you?

SOULS_LEADER · Post by **SOULS_LEADER** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:07 am

I love those two! But I do wanna see someone die once in a while XD

full_metal_sousuke · Post by **full_metal_sousuke** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:37 am

we can have tessa die (she can be killed by garoun)then sousuke kills garoun, then kaname and sousuke get together.

SOULS_LEADER · Post by **SOULS_LEADER** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:41 am

I am a firm beliver that Tessa is as Important as Kaname

Why?

Think about it...

Would FMP would be as Funny if Tessa isn't there?

Eventhough I do Love the Idea of S&K but still I like the idea of a Love triangle hell even a Love pentagon XD

MegaDaffy · Post by **MegaDaffy** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:53 am

I'll take this as a "No MegaDaffy, We did not look at the link you posted."

Weltall Elite · Post by **Weltall Elite** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:58 am

Well, let's be logical here. You're writing a fan fic, yet you're worried about ripping off someone else's stuff?

Just do what authors like Anysia did and outright say that your story is based on another story.

EDIT: That game has multiple endings? I only ever saw one. >_< Unless you count the one where time runs out and you lose.

SOULS_LEADER · Post by **SOULS_LEADER** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:11 am

Yeah I did read it! XD

Pyrite · Post by **Pyrite** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:56 am

I take it you're trying to draw ideas from the mentioned game, but don't want to stick too closely to the original plot details. Is that it?

Weltall Elite · Post by **Weltall Elite** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 2:58 pm

Well, having played the game, I can say that it'd be VERY hard to get too close to the original story of the game. The killer was a doctor. The heroine was his daughter. And if I recall, the killer had become a vampire and was eating people.

MegaDaffy · Post by **MegaDaffy** » Wed Feb 22, 2006 6:52 pm

He also said that his daughter was a vampire or if you want to get specific, had The Blood Of Dracula, and that she killed her mother then ate her (Nice kid).

But think about it, Sousuke goes insane from a virus in him that drives to the same thing the Doctor did,which was senselessly murder innocent bystanders. Kaname comes in and tries to stop him just like the doctor's daughter does. I won't do that whole "vampire" concept but, I don't know. and yes, Pyrite I am trying to write this WITHOUT ripping it off.

Yes, Weltall Elite, There were 3 endings according to GameFAQS.

1. Kill Your father who transformed into a hideous creature with a gun (Good)

2. Follow your father's orders and give yourself up for his life. (Bad)

3. You run of time and are trapped in his world (Also Bad).

EDIT: Didn't he shoot the bystanders with a gun and then take hostages?