Tsudou Make My Day (TMMD) New Novel/Dragon Mag *Spoilers*

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Part 2 of Chapter 1 by ravyn released!
http://ravyn-09.livejournal.com/34393.html

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Mirror has been updated ... :)
Still no TP lawyer knocking on our door....
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"Can I help you?, "you know this section is.." she broke off her sentence as the man walked towards her and nodded, "I think you can Captain".
Tessa looked down, "I haven't been called Captain in 4 years," Wha..what do you want?"
He gave her a devious grin, "I'm here to make sure you keep your promise."
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Here's a spoiler of a VERY important scene:

[ecs]"That's enough....don't chase after me anymore."
"What are you saying? I don't understand."
"Don't chase after me. Right me, I am with Kalinin in the helicopter. Leonard too. Or, maybe I have killed him. Poor Leonard......Even though I thought of running many times. But in the end I found out it's impossible. I can never beat those people. The more I struggle, the more I hurt. That's why, I'm sorry. Please don't chase after me. For you to chase after a person like me all these time, I really am happy. But, really--"
"Chidori?What are you talking about?"
He doesn't understand what she is saying. Why she said "don't chase after me"? He cannot comprehend.
No---
That's a lie. He know very well.
The face of Nemi's death flashed in his mind. Of course Chidori doesn't know about her. Nemi is just a representative of the dead. Whenever Souske searches Chidori, the greater the amount of people die. Enemy, or innocent. This is the truth. Chidori knows this too. When he seperate from the school, the main problem also lies there.
Don't chase after me.
That's what she said, that's what she knew. The more she struggles, the more pain it brings. Souske was just avoiding this reality.
"That's why...Souske...forget me......."
Darkness covers him. There's a feeling of being thrown into outer space. The sense of floating without support, and the never-ending darkness.
"Wait, Chidori, I..."
"We have to know when to stop. The two of us..."
There's nothing else he can do. Souske grips the sweat covered control stick tightly, and on the other side, Chidori was muttering something---just like when a person's having a fever and unconcious.
"Actually don't stop."
She said.
"I don't want this, definitely."
Her voice was filled with power.
"Souske, you hearing?"
"Ah--"
"I am ordering you in the name of vice president of the student council, listen carefully okay?"
The sound of tears, she on the other side of the line was crying.
"Come save me. I don't mind the number of sacrifice. No matter how many death, hundreds, thousands, millions it doesn't matter. Come get me. Use everything you have, use all those ridicules, troublesome soldier skills you have, beat even the toughest enemy, come embrace me!! You can do it can you?"
"Ah--Yes I can."
Feeling something inside his heart, burning, trembling. Souske replied with determination.
Yes. What else is holding him back? Even having to kill millions. No matter what hardship. He just want to grip her tightly with those hand. Then, what's there to be afraid of?
"I will come. Wait for me."
"Ah......"
Spilling tears, Kaname said.
"Souske......I like you the best."
"Me too. I love you."[/ecs]


Finally, they do something :-D

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Millions? No selfish intentions there. :roll:

...Oh well. On with the slaughter! :lol:

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Interesting tidbits here and there... Finally, the story's all coming together.

Though, I must say, I'm not much for the DBZ-powered Super Saiyan 5 Laeviathen (even though it lacks some simple requirements of those for original mech's), and the love scenes between Sousuke and Kaname seem to be becoming... more and more desperate. Sure, you want the two back together. But for how long of a time can you keep them separated before you bore your audience? I want some massacre!! NOW!! And show the true capabilities of the TDD team, Sousuke, Kurz, Mao, and and a finale that DELIVERS a massive multi-player online role-playing showdown!! YES!

...In any case, the story is excellent, as is the wording and the like. I'm just getting tired of Kaname being whisked away again and again (sure, twice or so, but come on...).

Now, if Gatou reintroduced GAURON... I'll be one happy fanboy. :D
Maybe he can have a super roboto Gauron army! DOOM-O. XD
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Rule #4 of Anime: Evil never dies, you only THINK it dies...

...don't we all wish :twisted:




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Aaaaaand the fumoffu mirror has been updated with chapter 2a and 2b.
Happy reading...
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"Can I help you?, "you know this section is.." she broke off her sentence as the man walked towards her and nodded, "I think you can Captain".
Tessa looked down, "I haven't been called Captain in 4 years," Wha..what do you want?"
He gave her a devious grin, "I'm here to make sure you keep your promise."
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๏̯͡๏﴿ <- they know....
█████████
█▄█████▄█
█▼▼▼▼▼
█ Raaaaaaaaawr!!!
█▲▲▲▲▲
█████████
__██____██___

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Post by krysinello »

Already read 2a and b of BOMF, good reads, however all the action happens in the last and the one before presumingly but I haven't read it.

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HELLFIRE wrote:Rule #4 of Anime: Evil never dies, you only THINK it dies...
*snort* Actually it would be really interesting if they did bring Gauran back but that's the oldest trick in the book right? That would make it soap esque with mecha

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Gauron could have a twin brother... who in fact is the father's brother's nephew's cousin's former roommate of Leonard.


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"Can I help you?, "you know this section is.." she broke off her sentence as the man walked towards her and nodded, "I think you can Captain".
Tessa looked down, "I haven't been called Captain in 4 years," Wha..what do you want?"
He gave her a devious grin, "I'm here to make sure you keep your promise."
-
๏̯͡๏﴿ <- they know....
█████████
█▄█████▄█
█▼▼▼▼▼
█ Raaaaaaaaawr!!!
█▲▲▲▲▲
█████████
__██____██___

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Post by KiLlEr »

Yes, and the twins name is.....


Kalanin :-o


Next question: which is the Evil twin? :twisted:
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That would be Mardukas. :twisted:

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anything new on the mmd front :x

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Post by Anonz »

it's doubtful that there will be anything for a long time i would assume

i mean, the spoilers have all been dealt and they're not gonna get to translating it for ages
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Post by ch0knaT »

Oh. Here it is. I feel it coming. Could it be? The battle of all the other battles? The rescue of all the other rescues? The destruction of all destruction?

:-o :-o :-o :-o


Well, the SousukexChidori scene there is wonderful. KYAAA! Finally. Finally. Finally. I just hope everything goes well for them in the end. If it doesn't? Demet! I will throw the creators off a 73 floor building with a nail attached to their eyes. </homicidal rabid fan girl> lol. I'm kidding.

I'm crossing my fingers, the ending should be well worth the wait and sleepless nights of getting addicted to FMP, not that the whole series wasn't fun. It's just that it should get the ending it deserves, building up the humongous anticipation should be well enough for the big blast. I'd just die if the finality would be anit-climax. That is, if this is drawing to a conclusion.

*sigh*

But please please please, they should get on with the novel. I'm getting impatient. XD

Hey, maybe their waiting for this to be done so they can finally make another anime. </overly optimistic pink ball of sunshine>

Weee..lu li lu li lu~

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