Wanted: help with translating FMP?F OP/EN song

[KiLlEr]

Hi all!

I'm working on authoring DVD's from the FMP?F fansubs. So far I have everything else set up as far as menus go, but I need one more element. The menus use the openening and ending songs as background music and I would like to run the translation of the songs as subtitles on the menus. Below is the 'best of breed' from a slew of software translation tools, which is still far from perfect. I was wondering if anyone would like to help me 'fill in' the blanks and do some artistic interpretation. I'm no good at Japanease translation (hence why I'm dependant on the trans software). I will use as much as I can from the fansub version of the OP/EN tunes, but they're incomplete.

TIA,
KiLlEr


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Series: FULL Metal Panic? Fumoffu
Title: That, probably is love, (Sore ga, ai Deshou)
Sung by: Shimokawa Mikuni


The proverb spring tear spills in the day when
That back the one person ???? rice you want however

Kindliness occasionally cruelty therefore
About it seeks answer you lose sight of

The town rainbow of the rainy rising is visible if
Something which now it probably will start walking starts

You are because is a tomorrow because
The one person drill you cannot live because
That you are moved so by the vicinity love is
Pain of the number of tears as for you knowing, from the ????
In that eye which is clear certain meaning searching
Smiling face finding you want

Without calling at all, such a feeling
It should have been transmitted to your chest to

Little by little as for the town, color is changed however
The ???? and others, the memory oven it is one it increases

One one of your word
Because now to hold it is closed, certainly
That it keeps to pile up with two people love is
The tomorrow which no one knows waits assuming
All right another it crying
You and the hand connecting
Walking, the rubbish ????

The feeling which the instant rides impulsively it to be
It is something which keeps raising little by little don't you think?
Loves as for the feeling which

You are because is a tomorrow because
The one person drill you cannot live because
That you are moved so by the vicinity love is
Pain of the number of tears as for you knowing, from the ????
In that eye which is clear certain meaning searching
The smiling face we would like to find

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Series: FULL Metal Panic? Fumoffu
Title: Blows in you the wind (Kimi ni Fuku Kaze)
Sung by: Shimokawa Mikuni


With the instantaneous slope which it starts running the wind it becomes
The positive shining which it bakes the inner part of the chest hot does

Each time it keeps getting near to Ah- you quick it becomes
You run the time the start which you make forebode the look which favorite

You call with small love, always on side natural time
As for today being possible be casual in such a wind with
In order for you to turn round, shortly is cut the hair which shaking
In addition one echoing in the laughter sky which increases, it keeps

Presuming upon kindliness, a little just it is hurt
Moving in the season when it goes and two people it is tied

Such an instantaneous ???? of the Ah- they call
To stare, feeling the miracle which it can encounter in this town the ????

Detouring, you who probably will return already a little walking you want
Very the day there is no at all being on side, in the wind i am accustomed
It may reach during the being cut off of the cloud, don't you think? is, the same sky seeing to lift
In this way also the tomorrow which is projected to that pupil passing you want

Also Ah- today rides the palm, the kind of ???? where
Because it overflows, " thank you "
We would like to become kind your for the sake of

You call with small love, always on side natural time
As for today being possible be casual in such a wind with
In order for you to turn round, shortly is cut the hair which shaking
In addition one echoing in the laughter sky which increases, it keeps

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[Taurec]

say euh could you compare your romanji with the following ...
maybe it's some help
(Bleeeeh don't have the time but as you can see everybody makes a different translation)


Sore ga, Ai Deshou

tatoeba ne　namida ga koboreru hi ni wa
sono senaka wo　hitorijime shitai kedo
"error monkey carburator"

yasashisa wa tokidoki　zankoku dakara
"Kindness can be cruel from time to time"
"because gentleness can sometimes also be cruel"

motomeru hodo　kotae wo miushinau
"the longer i search, the more i lose sight of the answer"
"so the more you seek after it, the more you lose the answer"

ameagari no machi　niji ga mieru nara
ima　arukidasou　nani ka ga hajimaru

kimi ga iru kara　asu ga aru kara
hitorikiri ja ikite yukenai kara
konna ni chikaku ni kanjiru　sore ga ai deshou
namida no kazu no itami wo　kimi wa shitteru kara
sukitooru sono me no naka ni　tashika na imi wo sagashite
egao mitsuketai

nani mo iwanai demo　konna kimochi ga
kimi no mune ni tsutawareba ii no ni

sukoshizutsu machi wa iro wo kaeru kedo
hora, omoide ga mata hitotsu fueta

kimi no kotoba no hitotsu hitotsu wo
ima dakishimerareru kara　kitto
futari de kasaneatte iku　sore ga ai deshou
daremo shiranai　ashita ga matteiru toshitemo
daijoubu　mou nakanaide
kimi to te wo tsunaide
aruiteku zutto

futoshita shunkan　tsunoru kimochi janaku
sukoshizutsu　sodateteiku mono da ne
aisuru kimochi wa

kimi ga iru kara　asu ga aru kara
hitorikiri ja ikite yukenai kara
konna ni chikaku ni kanjiru　sore ga ai deshou
namida no kazu no itami wo　kimi ga shitteru kara
sukitooru sono me no naka ni　tashika na imi wo sagashite
egao mitsuketai


Kimi ni Fuku Kaze

hashiridasu shunkan　sakamichi de kaze ni naru
yakitsuketa hizashi ga　mune no oku atsukushita

Ah-　kimi ni chikazuite　ikutabi hayaku naru
toki wo kakeru　hajimari no yokan saseru manazashi ga suki

chiisana ai de ii　itsumo soba de　atarimae no jikan
kyou dekiru koto wa konna fuu ni　nanigenai koto de
kimi ga furimuku you ni mijikaku kiritta kami ga yurete
mata hitotsu fueru waraigoe　sora ni hibiiteiku

yasashisa ni amaete　sukoshi dake kizutsuita
utsuriyuku kisetsu ni　mata futari yubareru

Ah-　konna shunkan wo　shiawase to yobetara
mitsemeatte kono machi de　deaeta kiseki wo kanjiteru

toomawarishite kaerou　kimi to mou sukoshi arukitai
nani mo nai hi koso　soba ni ite　kaze ni naretara
kumo no kirema ni todokisou da ne　onaji sora wo miage
sono hitomi ni utsushita asu mo　koushite sugoshitai

Ah-　kyou mo te no hira ni　noru you na yorokobi ga
afureru kara "arigatou"
yasashiku naritai　kimi no tame

chiisana ai de ii　itsumo soba de　atarimae no jikan
kyou dekiru koto wa konna fuu ni　nanigenai koto de
kimi ga furimuku you ni mijikaku kiritta kami ga yurete
mata hitotsu fueru waraigoe　sora ni hibiiteiku

[KiLlEr]

"error monkey carburator"? LOL!!!

And I though mine was a bit funky.

Here's the site I pulled it off of. The translation was done off of the Hirigana (katakana? can't tell, it comes up as unicode here), on this site:

http://www.maboroshi.nu/exaggeration/lyrics.html

Thanks for the replay though

[Taurec]

Ah there they found it .. pulled mine from a dutch anime board

[Rikku]

hey thx manz...... i have been looking for the lyrics....

but i cant seem to find the english version for jouhou.... hmmm is there a link to the english translation of that?

[PookaKitten]

Here's the site I pulled it off of. The translation was done off of the Hirigana (katakana? can't tell, it comes up as unicode here), on this site:

http://www.maboroshi.nu/exaggeration/lyrics.html

Kanji with hiragana. (not that you find the first without the second, anyway.)

Samantha

[KiLlEr]

Kanji with hiragana. (not that you find the first without the second, anyway.)

Samantha

Thx

Just couldn't tell as I donot have Asian extensions on that particular machine, so all I got was unicode (otherwise called AWLOG - 'A Whole Lot Of Garbage' ).

[KiLlEr]

A friend of mine from another forum has a niece that does Japanese translations as a line of work and, in an exchange of favors, is going to have her translate the words to the op/en songs for me.

I'll post is here as well.