Hahahahhahahah new Order of buisness MIGHT be best fic ever

[SOULS_LEADER]

I have now new associates that are helping me for steel hearts.

Terran Empire and Anysia are helping me

Executive producer- Terran

Creative Director- Terran

Information Director- Anysia

Political Correctness Advisor- anysia

Also they are charters

Terran - 2nd Lt Leonard Cranston
Nickname- Knight
AS name- Terran
Position-EOD specialist also XO for team SOULS

Anysia- Anisa M. Sryu
Student from Jendai High School

[StopWishing]

At least one of your "associates" wants nothing to do with your fic, and yet you chose to overlook that the person said 'no thanks'.

I doubt she wants to be some lame Sue in your fic, or let it be known she had anything to do with it.

[SOULS_LEADER]

hahhahaha i know im soooo evil lol. Wow i couldnt belive that i over looked that. Damn Sry bout that. I thought she was interested. Ehh oh well. Life is life no one could beat what other people think, miss interpretation if you would say... But life is life.

[terran empire]

i have my work cut out for me ohh boy this is going to be interesting

[SOULS_LEADER]

i Know. see cause people forget this is an interactive FIC. They can live there lives in the story. Make there own characters to call them your own

[terran empire]

Terran - 2nd Lt Leonard Cranston
Call-sign- Knight
AS name- Terran
Type M9 variant
Position-EOD specialist "Heavy Weapons" also XO for team SOULS

well that looks better
much more like a real military form

[SOULS_LEADER]

nice man but this ones better

Terran - 2nd Lt Leonard Cranston
Call-sign- Knight
Blood type-O+
D.O.B-12/12/85
Nationality- Caucasian
I.D#01121285ANG01SOULS
AS name- Terran
Type M9-HM Heavy Weapon mod
Position- Executive Officer
Specialization- Explosive Ordanance Disposal
Battle Position- Heavy weapon Squad Gunner
Info

-Mother Dead* was a Military RN

-Father Dead* Was a Sgt for 1st Special forces Detachment

-Was an Orphan

-Was taken by group L-337

-Became a terrortist

-Hired by Mithril's force 12

-Hired by Mithril's Team S.O.U.L.S

[cultnirvana]

I think you need to do a little learning before you attempt to write another fic. For starters "Nationality- Caucasian". Caucasian is racial classification, not a nationality. Nationality is, for instance, British, Japanese, Russian, i.e. the country a person is from.

I also think you need to improve your grammar and spelling before writing this (PLEASE do!). When I opened the first chapter to your last fic, I didn't even read past the first line due to lack of grammar, puncuation and spelling. It was actually really difficult to read due to such problems. It took several minutes to decipher. www.dictionary.com has numerous articles that help with such things, so please avail yourself of them and then perhaps you'll gain a larger audience.

Sorry if I seem to sound harsh or anything, but if you really want to take fanfic writing seriously (you once said you wanted to be as good as dd), you'll need to put a lot of work into it. Just some friendly advice.

And, yes, StopWishing is correct in saying that you mistook someone helping you with they wish to be in your fic.

[Taurec]

to whom it may concern ...

Use the PM function for squabble posts, this is Jae's backyard not yours.

For "real life" fic's make sure the ones who are actually in it approve it first.
i will remove on request if there's a base for it. (use common sense it can save a lot of retyping)

[SOULS_LEADER]

Yeah Me bad grammar

No, But seriously all of that is just basically fun posts up there(meaning it is not official) . All the PM i sent were just friendly letters to people. If you did not get the message this is what it meant. Do you want to make a character. You can personalize it and he/she will be used in steel hearts

Sincerly
SL

[SOULS_LEADER]

also let me explain about the gramar and speling mistakes. I'll let you in a secret i am new to the English language(My nationality is Filipino) and the worst part is I dont have spell check because i dont have microsoft word. So pls bear with me.

I Apologize for this misunderstanding
SL