[FIC] FMP! Mission Objective

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[FIC] FMP! Mission Objective

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Characters: Ensemble, Sousuke and Kaname
Genre: Romance/Comedy
Warning: Spoilers for all three seasons!!
Summary: If you were like me and strangely disappointed by the lack of a finished ending to Sousuke and Kaname’s romance, then you’ll understand why I wrote these.

Episode 1 - A Kiss is Just a Kiss
Rated PG13 - After the school dance, Kaname decides she needs to help Sousuke act more like a teenager. But things don’t turn out as expected and Sousuke winds up doing something he never thought he’d do.

Episode 2 - Some ‘Friendly’ Advice
Rated PG13 - Sousuke is confused about recent events with Kaname and Kurz tries to help him by giving him some lessons in love. And Melissa gives him the best advice she can give and Sousuke takes her words to heart.

Episode 3 - A Dinner Proposal?
Rated PG13 - Sousuke is heading back to Tokyo, intent on making things right with Kaname. But all he can think about is the kiss they shared two days prior. Would she forgive him? Can he get up the nerve to ask her to dinner? Or do his emotions take him a step further?

Episode 4 - Flowers for My Girl
Rated PG13 - Kaname can’t help but feel nervous as she awaits Sousuke picking her up for their first date. Sousuke comes prepared with all the advice he receieved from Kurz and Melissa. He hoped it would be enough to get him through the evening.

Episode 5 - Kiss Me You Fool!
Rated PG13 - Sousuke tries his hardest to make the evening special but everything he does always winds up making Kaname upset. With Kurz’ help, he manages not to annoy her too much.

Episode 6 - Girlfriend?
Rated PG13 - Kaname is a little confused about what happened on their date and the way Sousuke is taking it so lightly is only making her more agitated. But before the day is over, his true feelings come out and she's left dumbfounded as usual.

Episode 7 - To Keep You Safe
Rated PG13 - With their feelings out in the open now, Kaname and Sousuke must face them head on. And Kaname can't help but wonder why the sudden change in him but she keeps it to herself. Will she give him the answer he's looking for?
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Still awaiting #4 and I just wanted to give you more props for this! Loving it! :D
"I didn't want to leave, and I didn't mean to abandon you either. An anonymous order, plus a bitter exchange of words with a ghost...I can't dispute this direct order...I just feel, powerless. " - Sousuke Sagara

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Thanks Raishinshi! I really appreciate your praise. :D I'm working on the next one right now, just had a few snags over the past couple of days and I got sidetracked. I'll hopefully have it done by tomorrow. :)

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Sorry for the delay! :blush: Life just plain sucks. Here it is though:

Episode 4 - Flowers for My Girl
Rated PG13 - Kaname can’t help but feel nervous as she awaits Sousuke picking her up for their first date. Sousuke comes prepared with all the advice he receieved from Kurz and Melissa. He hoped it would be enough to get him through the evening.

Episode 5 - Kiss Me You Fool!
Rated PG13 - Sousuke tries his hardest to make the evening special but everything he does always winds up making Kaname upset. With Kurz’ help, he manages not to annoy her too much.

Enjoy! :D

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I must say, those RULED! 8)

I loved that part where Kurz is like “Not if I can help it. I’ve been trying to get him laid since the first day we met.” I lol'd so hard.

Good job! Can't wait for the rest! :-D
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Yay! Thanks Raishinshi! I'm glad you like them! Kurz is so easy to write for me. I swear I dated that guy before. :-o :lol:

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Hmm, I think I just found something worth doing over a 6-day holiday from work...
other than catching up on my already impossibly long 'to procrastinate on' list :-D

Oh, and welcome to the board's official circle of fanfic writers Fan4Lost. The
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Yay Plushie! :-D

Episode 6 - Girlfriend?
Rated PG13 - Kaname is a little confused about what happened on their date and the way Sousuke is taking it so lightly is only making her more agitated. But before the day is over, his true feelings come out and she's left dumbfounded as usual.

Enjoy. :-D

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Episode 7 - To Keep You Safe
Rated PG13 - With their feelings out in the open now, Kaname and Sousuke must face them head on. And Kaname can't help but wonder why the sudden change in him but she keeps it to herself. Will she give him the answer he's looking for?

Episode 8 - A Warm Welcome
Rated NC17 - Cue Tessa and her bumbling flirtatious advances toward Sousuke. Kaname can’t help but feel jealous but is reaffirmed of his affections later on. Except Sousuke loses his cool and winds up embarrasing himself this time.

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